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Goethe's Path

I once stepped into a labyrinth, that grew upon the crest The unraveled trail through silver pines, where ferns and grasses wept, Where birdsongs rose, from scattered boughs, and echoed to the west Moss grew to warm each foot with jade, while solemn trees had slept -- I remember how the stately timbers, had leaned against the sky I stood knee-deep in ancient times, my heart was on a quest to riddle through the forest's mind, into a honeycomb of sighs Each spire grew from sod and loam, and branches fell to rest -- Shards of sun, bright fingerlings, had haloed 'round my head Sparks shaved and thinned, by silver limbs, would reach to catch the sun, Like candles tall, along the trail, the dust burned rust and red It bounced with light, off fragile lattice, webs, and laces, spun -- Asylum blessed, so undisturbed, exquisitely serene My famished eyes were wide with awe, but yet was not my home Beneath each leaf, beneath each limb, were tiny worlds unseen With cushioned steps, I walked with care, for this was sacred loam _______________________________________________ Goethe Stanza

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/5/2015 5:33:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on having this beautifully descriptive poem featured on Soup's home page this week! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:35:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:41:00 AM
Add this to my favs Carrie!
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Date: 1/3/2015 9:49:00 AM
This is truly beautiful many congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2015 8:56:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your big win and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:22:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 7/18/2014 1:15:00 AM
yes, a masterpiece indeed, Carrie. Congrats on your well deserved placement.
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Date: 7/14/2014 5:00:00 PM
A masaterpiece! Carrie. You are without a doubt a GREAT POET. Many congrats on your first place win. Lainie
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Date: 7/13/2014 11:54:00 AM
Grats on your win!!! yay
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Date: 7/12/2014 3:55:00 PM
incredible, carrie.. cheers to you for a top win!.. huggs
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:16:00 AM
Carrie u hv a golden pen my dear friend! An awesome write,, matchless ,, congrats on first place win!
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Date: 7/11/2014 7:57:00 PM
I'm with david mohn. I find my wordly ability inept to expound on this write. Congrats on giving us such a wonderful write to read. Peace. :)
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Date: 7/11/2014 6:29:00 PM
a beautiful picture of sacred loam, Carrie. Congrats for the top win. Mohan
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:43:00 PM
It's hard to find words to describe how good this is Carrie...truly special
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:32:00 PM
Awesome, as usual. I particularly enjoyed the changes of view, from canopy to ground and back up again, from shade to light and back to shade. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:30:00 PM
I give you a top rating for this beautiful poem, Carrie. You tackled this picture theme brilliantly. Congrats on a merited top win. // paul
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Date: 7/11/2014 12:55:00 PM
This is over the top, Carrie. Loved every word. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2014 12:01:00 PM
Carrie truly beautiful!! I love each line you made :) your thirds stanza is breathtaking!! Love it.. Will go to my faves:) KUDOS!!
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:28:00 AM
Exquisite I wish I'd tried this! fav lines [Shards of sun, bright fingerlings, had haloed 'round my head]To my fav's Congrad's on your Win Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:28:00 AM
Congrats on top win, Carrie my friend!!.. A beautiful panted path indeed!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:46:00 AM
A gorgeous rendering of the prompt on Goethe's Path. Your imagery and the vocabulary fit so well together. Love that last line, it is a clincher.
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Date: 7/3/2014 3:06:00 AM
Dear Carrie..I can picture the image of sullight filtering through forest trees and reflecting its beaming shadows upon your face.It seems like a magical place to travel to,but yes its not our home,yet an awesome place to be : ).Lovely dear Carrie.
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