Goethe's Path


I once stepped into a labyrinth, that grew upon the crest

The unraveled trail through silver pines, where ferns and grasses wept,
Where birdsongs rose, from scattered boughs, and echoed to the west

Moss grew to warm each foot with jade, while solemn trees had slept
--

I remember how the stately timbers, had leaned against the sky

I stood knee-deep in ancient times, my heart was on a quest
to riddle through the forest's mind, into a honeycomb of sighs

Each spire grew from sod and loam, and branches fell to rest 

--
Shards of sun, bright fingerlings, had haloed 'round my head

Sparks shaved and thinned, by silver limbs, would reach to catch the sun,
Like candles tall, along the trail, the dust burned rust and red

It bounced with light, off fragile lattice, webs, and laces, spun

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Asylum blessed, so undisturbed, exquisitely serene

My famished eyes were wide with awe, but yet was not my home
Beneath each leaf, beneath each limb, were tiny worlds unseen

With cushioned steps, I walked with care, for this was sacred loam







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 Goethe Stanza
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Merryman Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Carrie, congrats on having this beautifully descriptive poem featured on Soup's home page this week! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 11:35 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Yvonne Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Yvonne Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Add this to my favs Carrie!
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:49 AM
This is truly beautiful many congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Congrats Carrie on your big win and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
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January 2, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Carrie, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 1:15 AM
yes, a masterpiece indeed, Carrie. Congrats on your well deserved placement.
George   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 5:00 PM
A masaterpiece! Carrie. You are without a doubt a GREAT POET. Many congrats on your first place win. Lainie
Nance Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Grats on your win!!! yay
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 3:55 PM
incredible, carrie.. cheers to you for a top win!.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Carrie u hv a golden pen my dear friend! An awesome write,, matchless ,, congrats on first place win!
Johnson Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 7:57 PM
I'm with david mohn. I find my wordly ability inept to expound on this write. Congrats on giving us such a wonderful write to read. Peace. :)
Chutani Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 6:29 PM
a beautiful picture of sacred loam, Carrie. Congrats for the top win. Mohan
Mohn Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 2:43 PM
It's hard to find words to describe how good this is Carrie...truly special
Jerden Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Awesome, as usual. I particularly enjoyed the changes of view, from canopy to ground and back up again, from shade to light and back to shade. Cheers, Roy
Callus Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 1:30 PM
I give you a top rating for this beautiful poem, Carrie. You tackled this picture theme brilliantly. Congrats on a merited top win. // paul
Gibson Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 12:55 PM
This is over the top, Carrie. Loved every word. Congratulations!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Carrie truly beautiful!! I love each line you made :) your thirds stanza is breathtaking!! Love it.. Will go to my faves:) KUDOS!!
Smith Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Congrats on top win, Carrie my friend!!.. A beautiful panted path indeed!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Guzzi Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Exquisite I wish I'd tried this! fav lines [Shards of sun, bright fingerlings, had haloed 'round my head]To my fav's Congrad's on your Win Light & Love
Poteet Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 9:46 AM
A gorgeous rendering of the prompt on Goethe's Path. Your imagery and the vocabulary fit so well together. Love that last line, it is a clincher.
Chircop Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 3:06 AM
Dear Carrie..I can picture the image of sullight filtering through forest trees and reflecting its beaming shadows upon your face.It seems like a magical place to travel to,but yes its not our home,yet an awesome place to be : ).Lovely dear Carrie.
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