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Hello co-poets, I persevered myself to copy and paste each types of poem. I'm not quite sure if this poem is Dramatic Verse. I think it is, if not can u pls maybe help me, thanks

~Jac

Gods White Out

Today is to stop the wishful thinking
About being eradicate or put an end to  disease 
 Hunger in the World
Rather be grateful for God’s mercy

The disciples overjoyed to know the power Jesus had given them
Raced to Him to reveal their successes
Jesus was happy for them but reminded the disciples
Were to rejoice because their names are written in heaven

Our names were written in heaven
No need to “wish things had been different”
God knows that we largely do the best we can with what we have
God knows that mistakes are inevitable or unavoidable for us

We are to trust God
Who alone knows our hearts
Accepts both imperfections
And the yearning of our life

We need to relish that God has the perfect white out 
Mercy
It is freely given
Never deserved

Corrects what we have done and failed to do
He welcomes us home
Healing power is given to few
His mercy extends to all

Written: 2262021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Thajudeen Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Our names were written in Heaven....true!
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