God's Trinity G.T. (1)

Three parts to the cross, you see,
Represents God’s trinity,
Pointed down to thee,
Of love to be,
And unto life  extended,
It is intended,
Will never be ended,

For see, for thee, to be,  a trinity,
Love is to be,
To make one free,
Strengthens all positivity, 
A free possibility,
As you learn the truth you shall see,
God’s love you shall be,

Dethrone all negativity,
Of the mind to be free,
And you will see,
The goon, of the mind’s loom,
You’ve heard of the wild goose,
But this goose has a noose,
Needing to be cut loose,
From the knife,
Of strife,
He thinks is his life,

O Love’s rain,
Ease the pain,
Of the mind’s reign,
The vain of Cain,

8-17-09johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/25/2009 12:10:00 AM
Like the inner poem in stanza one John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 11/1/2009 2:59:00 PM
Absolutely inspiring ... what a message for all to read... I have composed an entire book depicting the love of God in Jesus and am trying to post as many of the poems as possible... for all to enjoy ... thankxxx for appreciating my poetry about gifts we all have.. If u ever heard Crefalo Dollar preach on TV he is the one who started me on using my gift of poetry again... I have been writing since childhood .. thought I was done.. God wasn't...
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Date: 8/25/2009 12:26:00 PM
it is good and am a 11 years oid from leanne
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Date: 8/18/2009 5:27:00 AM
Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing poem John. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2009 2:15:00 AM
Especially like those first three lines John.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/17/2009 10:44:00 PM
Such a spiritual write, Moses, filled with a powerful message and vivid imagery. "The vain of Cain" can be released when, in the light of God's love, we learn to abandon "all negativity. Very uplifting. A welcome, wonderful read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2009 1:16:00 PM
Wonderful word play.... I supplied the beat in my head, platinum hit my friend.... Platinum hit.......;JP}
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