God's Tapestry

My footprints painting pictures on  land
While walking barefoot in wet sand.

Admiring the patterns on high
Created by clouds up in the sky.

Picking up the coral and shells
That wash ashore on the ocean swells.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:26 PM
very nice,all about being on the beach. I like it. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:29 PM
and Crystalline, I like those too!!
Johnson Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Very nicely woven. congratulations on lyour win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations Francine for your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Sky, Soil, Sea". Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Congrats Francine on your winning poem in Adeleke's contest with another victorious and glorious write... enjoy your spot in the circle now.. with luv..
Adeite Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Congrats on your worthy win in my contest. Thanks for the support and surprise. Please keep your poetry pen alive and keep painting your poetry pad with your passionate pen. Let the creative caps stay! Love, always, Adeleke
Farlouis Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Excellent! I love the ocean.
Horsman Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 2:32 AM
excellent crystalline Francine, Harry
Keogh Jr. Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:52 PM
That third verse has a nice honest rhyme to it that I like. I can feel that as I rerad. Thank you as always, Gerard
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Francine. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Stunning visuals, so tranquil.. Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 6:52 AM
A nicely worded Crystalline. Good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Very pretty and soothing ~~~
Belt Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Great write Francine.....Larr
A  Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 9:09 PM
LOVE IT & ENJOYED IT.-SKAT
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