Kim Rodrigues Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Notes About The Poem

Gods Springboard

Verdant green unfolds.
     Buds that star my eyes.
         Wings around me sing.
            I crave Spring’s tweeting.
                Its flow’ry sweeting.

                     Springs daffodils,
                           black-eyed susans,
                                painted roses,
                            plumerias.

                           Vivid hues —
                       merciful,
              kindhearted,

        invoke...
   inspire...

love.

3/2/2021
Spring Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
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Paula Goldsmith April 5, 2021 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful write with beautiful pictures. Have a blessed day/week................ Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2021 at 7:42 PM Thank you, Paula!

Regina Mcintosh April 4, 2021 at 6:42 AM Love it! Congratulations and Happy Easter! God bless you! Love, Gina Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2021 at 7:42 PM Thank you, Gina! Bless you too!

Joanna Daniel April 4, 2021 at 12:21 AM Lovely poem and a beautiful layout too, Kim:) congrats on your top win:) Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2021 at 7:42 PM Thank you, Jo!

Juliet Ligon March 10, 2021 at 9:20 PM Beautiful layout that matches your lovely spring expressions. Kim Rodrigues March 11, 2021 at 4:12 AM Thank you, Juliet :)

Michelle Faulkner March 9, 2021 at 7:49 PM The way you format this reminds me of a meadow sprinkled with flowers - all the spring colors come alive - and the last lines are so inspiring! Kim Rodrigues March 11, 2021 at 4:12 AM Thank you, Michelle! :)

Paulette Calasibetta March 5, 2021 at 11:52 AM The beauty of Spring will soon surround us. I love the vivid picture you have created here. Take Care, Paulette Kim Rodrigues March 5, 2021 at 12:54 PM Thanks, Paulette! Hugs

Judy Ball March 4, 2021 at 8:37 AM Oh yes indeed. Tnhis is a great one for Spring. Loved it. Am anxiously awaiting the pringing forth of the plants in my garden. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2021 at 2:04 PM Took a walk today! Enjoyed the roses and daffodils!

Bj Legros Kelley March 3, 2021 at 1:58 PM Oh, took my breath. Lovely! Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:16 PM Thank you, BJ!

Quoth Theraven March 3, 2021 at 1:16 PM Kim, Your poem makes a clean break from winter's softer colors and solitude. -Richard Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Richard!

P.S. Awtry March 3, 2021 at 9:46 AM what a beautiful poem, both its words, and its display on the page! Well done! Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:15 PM Thank you! I appreciate that!

Vijay Pandit March 3, 2021 at 9:39 AM Beautiful images, Kim, in this blooming spring poem. Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:16 PM Thank you, Vijay! Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Vijay!

Victor Buhagiar March 3, 2021 at 9:24 AM You amassed a lovely bouquet. At the moment I only have a few freesias. Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:15 PM Thank you, Victor!

Jenna Logan March 3, 2021 at 8:52 AM Spring is well depicted in your lines, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2021 at 8:54 AM Thank you, Jenna! This one took me a few days to get the right wording. But as a poet, you know we rarely find our work perfect. God bless you with bright and springboard days!