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Breathed into your hair, An everlasting prayer, While you slept soundly. I awoke to find, Our bodies and souls entwined, In love profoundly. Breathed into your hair, A thanksgiving prayer, While you slept softly.

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Date: 2/24/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations Robert,on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:13:00 AM
This is just wonderful, must be after the "love scene" in my one, congrats. Deirdre
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:01:00 AM
Very nice my friend...congrats!!!
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:43:00 AM
Many Congrats Robert for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu, dear Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:06:00 PM
I really like reading this one. It's lyrical and beautiful. Congratulations, Robert. HOw did I ever miss it?
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:44:00 PM
This is wonderful Robert!Love it.Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:54:00 AM
Really beautiful Robert, congratulations on your awesome win in Linda's contest ;-)
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:07:00 AM
Hello Robert, This reads like a beautiful song! I love it Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:46:00 AM
Awww, this is very beautiful Robert! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. I would have placed this higher as it is honest and beautiful. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:17:00 PM
Such beauty in this sleep. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:45:00 PM
Good presentation Bob. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:27:00 PM
Bob, a big congratulations on your honored place. agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of Linda, Robert
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:44:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support .. this poem just warmed my soul ...
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Date: 2/7/2011 1:35:00 PM
Nice pleasant picture , Robert
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:09:00 AM
Such a lovely and uplifting senryu series, Robert. Everyone who's fortunate enought o have someone special sleeping beside them should offer "A thanksgiving prayer." Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2011 9:57:00 PM
A very sweet and well written Senryu, Robert! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 2/6/2011 6:05:00 PM
Three very descriptive senryu here. Good work.
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