Robert A. Dufresne Poet Senryu

God's Special Creation

Breathed into your hair,
An everlasting prayer,
While you slept soundly.

I awoke to find,
Our bodies and souls entwined,
In love  profoundly.

Breathed into your hair,
A thanksgiving prayer,
While you slept softly.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:55 AM Congratulations Robert,on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin February 18, 2011 at 8:13 AM This is just wonderful, must be after the "love scene" in my one, congrats. Deirdre

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 5:01 AM Very nice my friend...congrats!!!

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:43 AM Many Congrats Robert for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:56 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 9:06 PM I really like reading this one. It's lyrical and beautiful. Congratulations, Robert. HOw did I ever miss it?

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 5:44 PM This is wonderful Robert!Love it.Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 11:54 AM Really beautiful Robert, congratulations on your awesome win in Linda's contest ;-)

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 10:07 AM Hello Robert, This reads like a beautiful song! I love it Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:46 AM Awww, this is very beautiful Robert! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. I would have placed this higher as it is honest and beautiful. Always, Annalise

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 8:17 PM Such beauty in this sleep. Many congrats for this win.

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 7:45 PM Good presentation Bob. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this.

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 7:27 PM Bob, a big congratulations on your honored place. agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 6:03 PM Congratulations onn the win in the contest of Linda, Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:44 PM Congrats Robert on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support .. this poem just warmed my soul ...

Dr.Ram Mehta February 7, 2011 at 1:35 PM Nice pleasant picture , Robert

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2011 at 10:09 AM Such a lovely and uplifting senryu series, Robert. Everyone who's fortunate enought o have someone special sleeping beside them should offer "A thanksgiving prayer." Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix February 6, 2011 at 9:57 PM A very sweet and well written Senryu, Robert! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Robert Pettit February 6, 2011 at 6:05 PM Three very descriptive senryu here. Good work.