Gods of Winds

Not a god, rather a goddess
brooding in the dark, 30 miles out
a lethal, murderous monster
deciding where to attack
and oh yes, did she attack
howling in fury, venting her rage
she attacked...
Wind gauges futile and flattened
She came to cleanse, to purge
cleanse our filth and purge our sins
Whipped up by God and Mother Nature
Sent to humble us, sent to teach us
to destroy our false Towers of Babel
our self-righteous, sacrilegious temples
She was horrible. She was beautiful. 
We never learn...

*Hurricane Camille - August, 1969
Mississippi Gulf Coast
Wind speed estimated at 230 MPH

Written on: 12/29/2014
Source: Biloxi, MS residents

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/1/2015 7:25:00 AM
Love your take on the wind topic, Tim. I went for the classic...you went for the modern. Hurricanes such as Camille soon bring us back to our senses. #7 // paul
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Date: 12/30/2014 10:06:00 AM
Yes, this wild, wild world! Time to take notice, right? Love, daver
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Date: 12/29/2014 6:26:00 PM
...and she had such a sweet name. Tim, this is nicely written and the connection to an actual event heightens its fury.
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Date: 12/29/2014 3:46:00 PM
I love how you related this one to Hurrican camille, very cleverly done, tim. I can't remember if I ever answered that soupmail you sent. I did read it and remember I was in a rush. Let me know if I didn't,ok? Hope to see more and more good ones like this from you in the new year.
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thanks for sharing , Tim,not going for the juggler
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Date: 12/29/2014 12:11:00 PM
Unique take on the theme - as was mine (lol) I am so glad we dont have these extreme conditions on our little Island - good luck in the contest Tim:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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