Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

God's Mercy

Pristine white room
Smell of spirit
The bed by the window
A frail dear one

God save her
God save her
 Cried my sad heart

Pristine white room
Smell of flowers
The bed by the window
Clean and neatly made

Oh where is God?
Oh where is God?
Cried my sad heart

Pristine white room
Filled with chocolates
The basinet by the window
A little angle crying

God bless the child
God bless the child
Cried my happy heart

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Dr.Ram Mehta September 11, 2010 at 4:18 AM Congratulations on this win in the contest, Tahera

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2010 at 5:48 PM Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest Tehera. Love Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2010 at 2:23 PM Congrats Tahera on your HM in Catie's contest... a magnificent piece and a super honor for u to enjoy my friend... with luv..

Joyce Johnson September 10, 2010 at 12:45 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels August 30, 2010 at 12:03 PM Tahera, what a beautiful write, thought provoking as well.. Thank you for your comments, love Wilma

John Freeman August 28, 2010 at 1:09 PM Many time we bewail the sadness , and forget to praise th joy. Good Job, Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire August 28, 2010 at 10:33 AM A very moving poem, Tahera. I like the way you employed the repeating verses to enhance the power of this verse. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta August 28, 2010 at 4:33 AM A very touchy and expressive write , Tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 27, 2010 at 6:12 PM A most lovely write Tahera... luv the repeated verses .. they make the poem say "take up and read me" .. I am important... a great piece my friend... am in Mississippi to see my son for the weekend... a few days in Maryland after that and then home in September some time... have your package all ready to go soon as I arrive home base and to post office luv.. happy weekend..

Skat A August 27, 2010 at 9:53 AM VERY MOVING WITH THE FEELING ENJoYED*lv~SKAT

Doris Culverhouse August 27, 2010 at 5:43 AM enjoyed reading today...heartfelt work!

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2010 at 10:28 PM Hey, this is very interesting how you showed three different scenarios! I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea