God's Mercy

Pristine white room
Smell of spirit
The bed by the window
A frail dear one

God save her
God save her
 Cried my sad heart

Pristine white room
Smell of flowers
The bed by the window
Clean and neatly made

Oh where is God?
Oh where is God?
Cried my sad heart

Pristine white room
Filled with chocolates
The basinet by the window
A little angle crying

God bless the child
God bless the child
Cried my happy heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/11/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 9/10/2010 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest Tehera. Love Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your HM in Catie's contest... a magnificent piece and a super honor for u to enjoy my friend... with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/30/2010 12:03:00 PM
Tahera, what a beautiful write, thought provoking as well.. Thank you for your comments, love Wilma
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Date: 8/28/2010 1:09:00 PM
Many time we bewail the sadness , and forget to praise th joy. Good Job, Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:33:00 AM
A very moving poem, Tahera. I like the way you employed the repeating verses to enhance the power of this verse. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 4:33:00 AM
A very touchy and expressive write , Tahera
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Date: 8/27/2010 6:12:00 PM
A most lovely write Tahera... luv the repeated verses .. they make the poem say "take up and read me" .. I am important... a great piece my friend... am in Mississippi to see my son for the weekend... a few days in Maryland after that and then home in September some time... have your package all ready to go soon as I arrive home base and to post office luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 8/27/2010 9:53:00 AM
VERY MOVING WITH THE FEELING ENJoYED*lv~SKAT
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Date: 8/27/2010 5:43:00 AM
enjoyed reading today...heartfelt work!
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Date: 8/26/2010 10:28:00 PM
Hey, this is very interesting how you showed three different scenarios! I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
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