God's Love

Exhilaration
           Your majesty to unfold
                                      The gift of springtime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Prophet Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 8:51 PM
How strange that you would think of me as Elijah The Prophet, Laurie. Whaat if I told you that I was he. Would you believe God? Read Malachi the last chapter the 4th and 5th verse. Believe it or not. God Bless You precious Ivory Dove.
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May 9, 2009 at 12:38 PM
What a wonderful perspective of spring. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational and uplifting poem with us. Thank you for your kincd words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
Ehigiator Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Congrats on your win my friend, this was truly amazing..Best Wishes Always, Love Tyesha
Augustus Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Bringing spring time back to the Creator? Seems obvious; but I would have never thought of that! Brilliant! Congratulations on your placement in the Springtime contest.
Townsend Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Great write. Congratulations on placing third in the Springtime contest. Smiles from Lolita
Rider Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~
La France Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Moreno Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Congrats on placing third Laurie...Raul
Strand Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Laurie.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations Miss Laurie....Now this one has excitement over springtime written all over it!!! :)...God's amazing gift!
Devonshire Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Very nice, Laurie, and true to the haiku format! Love, Carolyn
Goff Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 4:10 AM
we're still waiting here in Mn. (-3 below this am!) sweet haiku! Laurie, thx for comments, I had that dream every nite for 6yrs. when I was a little boy, everyone in my family would hear me wake with a start in the middle of the night, call out to me, "are you ok?" & go back to sleep! Jim
Rhinem Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 8:42 AM
Smile~And of course, "I saved the best for last, but, by far, not the least!!!!~Smile~"I Love Your Faith Laurie!!!!"~To myself~"It makes 'You' stand out even brighter among the crowd!!!"~It has been a sincere joy and pleasure visiting with "You" today dear gifted lady!!!! And, I look forward to it very soon again!!!~"My Love To You & Your Loves Always, John!!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!"~Bye Dear!:):)
Esquire Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 9:23 PM
Dear Laurie,This is a very Beautiful Expression of YOUR muti-TALENTED POETIC ARTISTRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG LAURIE, YOUR comment "Write on young(OLD) Esquire, write on" I did I ask YOU to Read my POEM "The Heart of a POET -- Speaks (Part 2) I would like YOUR thoughts on it ALWAYS...HG
Moreno Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 1:33 AM
Beautifully written, nice haiku...Raul
Tugaff Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Hello Laurie, this is a well-penned Haiku. I love this short form of a poem. Keep on sharing. Ernilando
Esquire Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 6:40 PM
Dear Laurie, Excellent Spring Haiku Good Luck in the contest I have a couple of Haiku that one word is 5 syllables This is truely Perfect in all aspects of Haiku ALWAYS...HG Laurie I read your comment on Ruben O's POEM "Caramel--Dulce de Leche"First off I am a man that knows how to cook 30 years as a Chef 15 more learning the trade the recipe Ruben gave is more of a Bread Pudding a true Dulce de Leche takes at least a week to be perfected I also teach Culinary Arts in College Yours...HG
P. Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 5:07 AM
absoluetly true... you are no exception yourself, you poems reflect life... and thats how i like... this haiku is wonderful!! ~ Arany
Reynolds Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 1:45 AM
Beautiful, inspiring and magestic, well done. :) Did you figure out the centering thing? Love, Kristin
Prance Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Everything coming back to life,Gods creationwhat a beautiful sight< Marie
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 6:09 PM
We're all longing for spring are we not? This is nice. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
Winter Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Exactly the way I was feeling outside today! (Wish I wrote this!) Simply beautiful! Love, Shar
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March 7, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Wonderful uplifting and inspirational poem. Beautiful! Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen
Bingham Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 10:53 AM
A beautiful poem, and you cannot out do God's handy work. spring is proof in the puddin. Blessings, Ron
Higgins Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 10:48 AM
This beautiful my friend..Love the title and the words breathe spring.
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