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God's Little Queen

Have you seen the old woman shuffling down the big city sidewalk? She comes from a different world privy to her and her suitors. She carries herself as elegantly as her squeaky wheeled walker will allow. An older styled but clean , polished purse hangs from her rolling companion aide. Her Highness has graced her court this day by wearing a long faded clean lavender gown with a frilly neckline flowing loosely down to her royal black sneakers. This ladies’ hair is combed and halos her dark brown face with a soft sheen. Her chin is raised slightly in a regal manner as if to show the silver choker and tarnished locket around her slim neck. If you ask her what it is, she’ll softly say a few words of her lost baby and a troubadour prince. She is obviously of royal blood in her world, but obvious as her royal bloodline is, her position at the top of her world is betrayed by lonely eyes as she surveys this one. Her majesty is queen of her world and is proud to be also a child of God. Please be reverent and say one for her as she shuffles stately by, gracing you with a slight nod and a wisp of a smile. You may steal one last look at her before she retires to her chambers under the old railroad bridge. Admire her for she is true queen of her world of poverty and loneliness. Her very presence heralds it ..from her royal black sneakers to the neatly bobby pinned placement of her …Burger king crown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 11:30:00 AM
I love it and agree, she is indeed a queen. Royalty finds strange places to appear. By the way..is there such a word as muchly ?
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:08:00 PM
oh my that was poweful and invoking
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:26:00 PM
What a powerful and true to life poem make us think of some of the things we take for granted great write loved it.
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Date: 4/13/2010 11:40:00 AM
excellent write.hope all is well with you.Haven't heard from you in awhile.
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Date: 4/6/2010 11:21:00 AM
It is sad to know this person speak of can be us one day.
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Date: 4/5/2010 1:32:00 PM
True and unfortunate, most that I have met still have their dignity intact
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Date: 4/4/2010 11:03:00 AM
sad poem, we are all a step away form despair. I see that every day more and more.
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:02:00 AM
That is sad that one on in age would live the life of the homeless....In America there should be help with someone who put her in touch with the right agencies...Great write on a sad topic...Thanks for the kind comments on my work.Sara
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:30:00 PM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:55:00 AM
greater that most great ones. They write my poem was featured this week.. what do they mean..? Still in la la la land. Went to Venice beach.. You and I fit there, even the horses.
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:04:00 AM
With a smile I enjoye the read..Cute ending..
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Date: 3/22/2010 4:36:00 AM
very insightful piece, i always enjoy your writing. nice!
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Date: 3/21/2010 9:16:00 PM
The "reality" of the situation: Heartbreaking and sadly, all too common Your portrayal of her: compassionate, insightful, well done, uniquely yours. I would expect nothing less. Great write Robert.
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Date: 3/21/2010 5:56:00 AM
Yep! We have quite a few here in Saginaw living under the Saginaw River bridge. There is one - I won't say old, just haggard - bent-double peddlar one might see walking everywhere with his big, brown sack over one shoulder. He doesn't beg or steal. Like your "Queen", he's probably a pretty good soul. Love, daver
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Date: 3/20/2010 9:02:00 PM
Interesting outlook you took on a homeless lady. I have rarely seen any smile though, but the poetry and imagery of this write is majestic indeed. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/20/2010 8:39:00 PM
Hey buddy.... I thoroughly enjoyed this tale about her majesty.... Sounds like my ghetto grandmother....HeHe, god rest her soul......Excellent write my friend.....:JP]
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