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God's Labyrinth

God's Labyrinth A game I play in a race in a maze against no ordinary race. Where my human mind begins to raise the thoughts in box of lost and found. In order to see I have to open my eyes and sweep the seas. The passion within will never exposes to compare the picture of one's stare. Water and fire are 2 simile only I choose to see. Hot and cold no one knows the beauty that will never show. The sun and moon are 2 buddies blinding us with beauty like bullies. Pulverizing my pain darken the stain with nothing to gain. look inside you won't see beauty on this side where I hide while I'm alive. Love bought me time from the enemy at the gate of hate and crime. Ashes to ashes a life with no trust a box of rust and dust to dust. To find the tie that binds true beauty beyond the skies, I would truly have to die. I hold my chest~ pass all pawns across the chess of God's land holding his hand. A puzzled walk connecting~dots of faith, hope, and victory in God's Labyrinth. by;p.d.

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Date: 2/4/2016 11:01:00 PM
cute enough **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2013 4:50:00 PM
Thank you for eveything.You dont even know how much you have done has meant to me.Beyond words,you have rendured my speechless.Still trying to recouperate after the past couple days and my trip to the er at 1:00am by ambulance.I couldnt stop throwing up.Have a fantastic rest of your sunday and thank you for my place in your friendship contest.My soup family are the only friends i have.I read skats blog.congrats auntie.It wont replace your grandson but hopefully bring joy to you all.Colleen
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Date: 6/9/2013 4:51:00 PM
p.s.cant wait to hear you guys announce its a girl.
Date: 3/4/2013 10:39:00 AM
the maze of life, PD, you certainly know, how to inspire,, just love this...
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:35:00 PM
I love the metaphors here. Life is sort of like a labyrinth I guess. God write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:03:00 AM
Hi,there,Pd.thanks so much for the placement of my poem on Dale. I appreciate it. Glad you liked it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:12:00 AM
This is an amazing poem PD and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Dedication contest with my poem, Helena, my dear heart, a poem about my Grandma, she is the reason I write, thank you~~
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Date: 7/11/2011 4:06:00 PM
A surely deep plumbing of the highs n lows of life...But you are loved by us dumb unscrubbed, pathetic poetic lice :) loves ya, Don
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:52:00 AM
a great write, enjoyed reading this one. You have been gone a while, nice to see you posting again. thank you for commenting on Falling Star.
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:18:00 AM
Well congrats to you....have yall been together a long time or is this new? I did not know. you are full of surprises.
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:45:00 PM
I AGREE WITH HGARVEY. Awesome! Lainie.
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:56:00 PM
Dear POET, This POEM touches me deeply YOUR Thoughts embedded in my mind a fine Write I am in Hopes I may Comment more on YOUR Amazing POETRY SUPERB YOUR Liege, With LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:16:00 PM
Well, well, my friend. You have pulled all the stops out! Everything was flowing. A sobering piece, great write! With my "The Situation" the first part was about my life at the time. My life is now about the end of the poem, which is where I want to be and I am happy right here. Thanks for your love. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 7/2/2011 1:01:00 PM
OMGNESS ......wow ( clapping hands while standing up )
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Date: 6/29/2011 8:32:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful and intensely powerful write my friend. "Pulverizing my pain darken the stain with nothing to gain.look inside you won't see beauty on this side where I hide while I'm alive." The things which you have painted in this beautiful write are so serious that one can not go without pondering on them. Great write my friend. Hope you are very fine. I have placed a new Poem 'Radha's Love Song' Hope you would enjoy it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra..Poet D
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:18:00 PM
Love the rhyme within the line and your message is amazing.
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Date: 6/25/2011 4:43:00 AM
Awesome and powerful write, p.d.! And thank you for all your kind comments! I hope you're doing well and have a great weekend!....Gert:)
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:47:00 PM
Hey there, P.D just going off for the night and hoping sometime you will drop me a note. LEt me know what all is going on in your world! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:27:00 PM
Intense and power-packed piece ...amazing..
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:43:00 PM
Awesome job here! Very creative with a profound message. Thanks so much for sharing!
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:59:00 AM
Very nice write and amzing use of words. Good for my exploration in different styles and ideas in writing.
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:49:00 AM
Nice write. The reader can not skip quickly through this poem to grasp it's meaning. Nice play on words.
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Date: 6/17/2011 11:32:00 AM
Nice pattern >dimix<
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Date: 6/17/2011 1:00:00 AM
soup mail delivered.. oh, the time zone difference!! pls check, hon! ;)
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:52:00 AM
in-depth, PD!! wow.. SOUP MAIL! :)
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:31:00 PM
this was a great and powerful write p.d love cory
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