Poet Destroyer A Poet Rhyme

God's Labyrinth

God's Labyrinth

A game I play in a race in a maze against no ordinary race.
Where my human mind begins to raise the thoughts in box of lost and 
found. 
In order to see I have to open my eyes and sweep the seas.
The passion within will never exposes to compare the picture of one's 
stare.
Water and fire are 2 simile only I choose to see.
Hot and cold no one knows the beauty that will never show.
The sun and moon are 2 buddies blinding us with beauty like bullies.


Pulverizing my pain darken the stain with nothing to gain.
look inside you won't see beauty on this side where I hide while I'm 
alive.
Love bought me time from the enemy at the gate of hate and crime.
Ashes to ashes a life with no trust a box of rust and dust to dust.
To find the tie that binds true beauty beyond the skies, I would truly 
have to die.
I hold my chest~ pass all pawns across the chess of God's land holding 
his hand.
A puzzled walk connecting~dots of faith, hope, and victory in God's 
Labyrinth.


by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:01 PM cute enough **SKAT**

Colleen Bono June 9, 2013 at 4:50 PM Thank you for eveything.You dont even know how much you have done has meant to me.Beyond words,you have rendured my speechless.Still trying to recouperate after the past couple days and my trip to the er at 1:00am by ambulance.I couldnt stop throwing up.Have a fantastic rest of your sunday and thank you for my place in your friendship contest.My soup family are the only friends i have.I read skats blog.congrats auntie.It wont replace your grandson but hopefully bring joy to you all.Colleen Colleen Bono June 9, 2013 at 4:51 PM p.s.cant wait to hear you guys announce its a girl.

Harry Horsman March 4, 2013 at 10:39 AM the maze of life, PD, you certainly know, how to inspire,, just love this...

Judy Ball August 14, 2011 at 8:35 PM I love the metaphors here. Life is sort of like a labyrinth I guess. God write my friend. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2011 at 11:03 AM Hi,there,Pd.thanks so much for the placement of my poem on Dale. I appreciate it. Glad you liked it. LUv, Andrea

Constance La France July 13, 2011 at 8:12 AM This is an amazing poem PD and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Dedication contest with my poem, Helena, my dear heart, a poem about my Grandma, she is the reason I write, thank you~~

Don Johnson July 11, 2011 at 4:06 PM A surely deep plumbing of the highs n lows of life...But you are loved by us dumb unscrubbed, pathetic poetic lice :) loves ya, Don

James Foulk July 11, 2011 at 10:52 AM a great write, enjoyed reading this one. You have been gone a while, nice to see you posting again. thank you for commenting on Falling Star.

Doris Culverhouse July 11, 2011 at 9:18 AM Well congrats to you....have yall been together a long time or is this new? I did not know. you are full of surprises.

Elaine George July 9, 2011 at 11:45 PM I AGREE WITH HGARVEY. Awesome! Lainie.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire July 9, 2011 at 6:56 PM Dear POET, This POEM touches me deeply YOUR Thoughts embedded in my mind a fine Write I am in Hopes I may Comment more on YOUR Amazing POETRY SUPERB YOUR Liege, With LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Joy Wellington July 2, 2011 at 8:16 PM Well, well, my friend. You have pulled all the stops out! Everything was flowing. A sobering piece, great write! With my "The Situation" the first part was about my life at the time. My life is now about the end of the poem, which is where I want to be and I am happy right here. Thanks for your love. Joy (Jew)

Eddie Merritt July 2, 2011 at 1:01 PM OMGNESS ......wow ( clapping hands while standing up )

Ravindra K Kapoor June 29, 2011 at 8:32 PM Amazingly beautiful and intensely powerful write my friend. "Pulverizing my pain darken the stain with nothing to gain.look inside you won't see beauty on this side where I hide while I'm alive." The things which you have painted in this beautiful write are so serious that one can not go without pondering on them. Great write my friend. Hope you are very fine. I have placed a new Poem 'Radha's Love Song' Hope you would enjoy it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra..Poet D

Elizabeth Wesley June 29, 2011 at 12:18 PM Love the rhyme within the line and your message is amazing.

Gert W. Knop June 25, 2011 at 4:43 AM Awesome and powerful write, p.d.! And thank you for all your kind comments! I hope you're doing well and have a great weekend!....Gert:)

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2011 at 9:47 PM Hey there, P.D just going off for the night and hoping sometime you will drop me a note. LEt me know what all is going on in your world! Luv, Andrea

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 22, 2011 at 8:27 PM Intense and power-packed piece ...amazing..

Mary Meade Stephenson June 22, 2011 at 1:43 PM Awesome job here! Very creative with a profound message. Thanks so much for sharing!

Jesse James Forster June 18, 2011 at 10:59 AM Very nice write and amzing use of words. Good for my exploration in different styles and ideas in writing.

Ernie J June 18, 2011 at 4:49 AM Nice write. The reader can not skip quickly through this poem to grasp it's meaning. Nice play on words.

Dom- X- June 17, 2011 at 11:32 AM Nice pattern >dimix<

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2011 at 1:00 AM soup mail delivered.. oh, the time zone difference!! pls check, hon! ;)

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2011 at 12:52 AM in-depth, PD!! wow.. SOUP MAIL! :)

Cory Long June 16, 2011 at 1:31 PM this was a great and powerful write p.d love cory

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