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elements five, our forms lace earth, water, fire, air, space to aliveness integral gateway to Gods miracles think not hermit, simply feel soundless bliss thunder appeal elements five, our forms lace 07-July-2021 Elemental poetry contest Sponsor: Charles Messina Notes: This form consists of 7-lines, 7-syllables each line. The rhyme pattern is AABBCCA. Also, the first and last lines must be the same. An "Elemental" must pertain to the three elements- (earth, water, sky).

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Bhawana Pant

Date: 7/31/2021 10:22:00 AM

Congrats!! Soundless bliss thunder appeal elements five , our forms lace. Great!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/31/2021 11:07:00 PM

Thanks, Bhawana!

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 5:29:00 AM

Wonderfully written, Unseeking Seeker. Great poetry...Congratulations on your fine win! Charlie

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/31/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thank you, Charles! Your effort, sponsoring the contest

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:34:00 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/31/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Chris! Must have a look at the results now

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2021 11:12:00 AM

Truly the elements are a "gateway to God's miracles!" Delightful joy, awakening "awareness," shining through every line Seeker! Best wishes and blessings for the contest. :D

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/7/2021 6:12:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/7/2021 5:38:00 AM

Very original writing. Wonder about your hermit?

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 7/7/2021 2:23:00 AM

excellent creative writtings

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/7/2021 3:45:00 AM

Thanks, Mahtab!