Written on August 11, 2024
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hearts tremble, shudder and break beneath the dark gaze of dreaded mistakes grief sends a message that life won’t forsake, while bitter becomes sweet as gentle snowflakes souls sigh, whisper and groan seeking the solace of hope and love while sometimes struggling all alone blessings flow quietly, from God above hearts remember, consider and learn through the shadows, a faded glow prompting the spirit to sincerely discern while the memories teach us to grow souls stir, dazzled by God’s amazing while the faintest doubt can disillusion there is a melody that keeps me praising the story reveals a sweet conclusion hearts heal when His peace persuades breathing light, a rustle of still grace through the spirit who never evades the song of heaven echoed by God’s embrace
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