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Gods and Pinnacles

Over the houses of living beings Places of Gods Pinnacles of Churches Mosques And temples Colossal and magnificent Glorious scare in the air Those Gods never expected Birds that fly in sky Sometimes perch on that And have a rest Being a God of God Without any care Invaded investors Build their glorious tombs Exceeding the pinnacles Gods and agents are silent They want them To scare the bellow and to follow For the splendid survival Udaya R. Tennakoon

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2013 5:25:00 PM

Nice featured poem~SKAT

Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 1/20/2013 6:17:00 PM

thanks very much. SKAT Udaya

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2013 9:20:00 AM

Udaya R. Tennakoon, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 1/20/2013 11:35:00 AM

Thanks very much Linda. I wish you the best Udaya

Berinde Ovidiu-Claudiu

Date: 1/7/2013 2:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem.Hope to read some more of your work soon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2013 10:04:00 PM

Udaya, , it has been a pleasure finding and reading the first poem you posted on the soup. by the way you have a very interesting pen to share... I fear God, love the poem and the point you are reaching...LINDA

Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 1/7/2013 2:44:00 AM

Hi, Linda, thank you very much for the comment.. udaya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/20/2012 10:41:00 AM

A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Udaya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 12/20/2012 12:43:00 PM

Thank you very much Carol.. Wish you the best too udaya