Gods and Pinnacles

Over the houses of living beings
Places of Gods
Pinnacles of
Churches
Mosques
And temples
Colossal and magnificent
Glorious scare in the air
Those Gods never expected

Birds that fly in sky
Sometimes perch on that
And have a rest
Being a God of God

Without any care
Invaded investors
Build their glorious tombs
Exceeding the pinnacles

Gods and agents are silent
They want them
To scare the bellow and to follow
For the splendid survival

Udaya R. Tennakoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/20/2013 5:25:00 PM
Nice featured poem~SKAT
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 1/20/2013 6:17:00 PM
thanks very much. SKAT Udaya
Date: 1/20/2013 9:20:00 AM
Udaya R. Tennakoon, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 1/20/2013 11:35:00 AM
Thanks very much Linda. I wish you the best Udaya
Date: 1/7/2013 2:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.Hope to read some more of your work soon.
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Date: 1/6/2013 10:04:00 PM
Udaya, , it has been a pleasure finding and reading the first poem you posted on the soup. by the way you have a very interesting pen to share... I fear God, love the poem and the point you are reaching...LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2013 2:44:00 AM
Hi, Linda, thank you very much for the comment.. udaya
Date: 12/20/2012 10:41:00 AM
A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Udaya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2012 12:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol.. Wish you the best too udaya
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