John Freeman Poet Quatrain

"god's Ace" (Up the Sleeve)

Great solar winds
Agape’s breath
Where souls began
Cosmos's bequeath

First living soul
Then quickened spirit
Life’s son of gold
Mind soon seared it

Minds spent time
Lost from Agape
Became cursed in time
And not love’s copy

Within love’s genre
As solar wind blows
Renewing must be
Love's kingdom glows

The kingdom not swayed
By observation
Love's DNA
Whole convocation

Agape’s copy
Surety of life
Never sloppy
Devours the mind's strife
 
Life has surety
Carnal will not sway
Ace of purity
Holy DNA!!

3-5-2010

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Gerard Keogh Jr. March 22, 2010 at 1:28 PM I love that last line! I just see Robin turned to the camera as Adam West announces his solution to the latest riddle! You have an ingratiating style. Hang onto your life and your style. Regards, Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2010 at 12:50 PM thanks for your inspirational writing, john, and for your many recent comments to me. I liked the imagery of Agape's breath and the solar winds in this one. LUv, andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 14, 2010 at 6:02 AM You've got it right on, Moses. The last line iw the key to understanding God's Creation! Smiles. Lovingly, Dane Ann (PS, John, I read a poem/story on here that I think you will absolutely love. Here's the link=>http://poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=211699 Be sure to read both parts. I just had to share this awsome work by a fellow souper with you...a man of spiritual depth. ENJOY!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2010 at 8:17 PM Perfection Moses.. a wonderful brilliant write and immense message of salvation ... luv the analogy of the ace up God's sleeve.. very unique ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne March 10, 2010 at 5:28 PM Hello Moses, enjoyed your poem today, holy DNA would have been a good name too. Thanks for sharing. As Daver would say Big Love! Robert

Mary Meade Stephenson March 10, 2010 at 8:35 AM Excellent piece you have penned here Moses....deep and thought provoking. A testament to your faith! HIS truth always will shine! Always a joy to read your poems! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a Gloriously Blessed day~Mary

Daver Austin March 8, 2010 at 2:49 PM This Holy DNA you speak of...what an interesting thought! Too bad the scientists can't see it through their microscopes. BIG LOVE, daver John Freeman March 31, 2013 at 3:42 PM They do see it Dav, they just dont know what it is when they see it! Smile, thanks for comment. Agape moses

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2010 at 7:24 AM John, I thought that I had commented on this one but I do not see it here...If we all could just get closer and closer to the one who made us then we would not be so easily swayed by the carnal...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Sheila Parrish-Spence March 7, 2010 at 12:24 PM Well at least DNA is an improved perfection over HLA. Life is so precious. I love the way you intertwine your thoughts as you creatively blend faith and reality.

Kelly Zakerski March 7, 2010 at 3:38 AM Thank you Moses - but what win did I receive with Letting Go?

June Ellen Smith March 6, 2010 at 1:52 PM Holy DNA indeed, nice write. Thank you for your comments today. Thankfully my hair is not thinning too much, although it's always been fine. :-). Please call me June Ellen or just Ellen is fine. Always Ellen

David Byrne March 5, 2010 at 10:47 PM Great idea and great flow!

James Fraser March 5, 2010 at 6:53 PM Lovely write to your faith John, i am not a religious person. But i do have to say that i thank you ever so much for your ever kind words. It does look like i will be a stranger from the soup from the end of this month, infinitive >> its been lovely >> all the very best >> Chowa .... from the Highlander >> James

Audrey Haick March 5, 2010 at 2:19 PM Holy DNA, indeed!! Just super, JohnMoses!! Goes to my favs.! THanks for sharing this with! Peace, Audrey

Diane Christian March 5, 2010 at 12:34 PM a wonderful poem, wel written, God bless you from diane

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2010 at 9:02 AM Spiritual perspectives from your wonderful heart, Moses! This is very inspirational, my friend. Loved the reference to "Holy DNA." Awesome! Love, Carolyn