Godless

me
lurking  in-between my neat 
but frequently absent reasoning.
godless.

kind of creepy stuff, dude..
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Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 5:37 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
Mehta Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Creative and impressive thoughts on godless, Sacha
J Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Interesting. Gives the reader something to ponder. Keep it up.
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 3:53 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sacha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Nutter Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:45 AM
Self reflection can sometimes be the most scariest place to visit. Especially if it is godless. Excellent write.
Song Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:49 AM
Sacha- This is a lil creepy dude! ha ha. Just kiddin..I like your youth-like expressions in this fun piece. You aren't really godless, are U? Gwendolen
Iacob Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:12 AM
ha! It comes and goes.. Actually I keep a very close heart string with my god. I try only not to take myself to seriously when I am not up to it.. You may found the same approach in all my..stuff.Thanks for the comment. Sacha
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