Godless

me lurking in-between my neat but frequently absent reasoning. godless. kind of creepy stuff, dude..

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 7:30:00 AM

Creative and impressive thoughts on godless, Sacha

Ernie J

Date: 5/20/2011 5:44:00 AM

Interesting. Gives the reader something to ponder. Keep it up.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 3:53:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sacha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/20/2011 2:45:00 AM

Self reflection can sometimes be the most scariest place to visit. Especially if it is godless. Excellent write.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/20/2011 1:49:00 AM

Sacha- This is a lil creepy dude! ha ha. Just kiddin..I like your youth-like expressions in this fun piece. You aren't really godless, are U? Gwendolen

Sacha Iacob
Date: 5/20/2011 2:12:00 AM

ha! It comes and goes.. Actually I keep a very close heart string with my god. I try only not to take myself to seriously when I am not up to it.. You may found the same approach in all my..stuff.Thanks for the comment. Sacha