Karen Anglesey Poet Rhyme

Goddess of War

Furious scowls reveal marked displeasure
Void of joy, she pointed her finger
Muddling through a decayed existance
Cloaked in hostility  she sputtered and hissed
While keeping her life clenched tight in a fist
The goddess of war reigns pained indignance
Afraid of losing control, she tightens her grip
Unable to unlock the secret of this spiritual disease
The angry spirit of menacing flesh has thrown away the key






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Justin Bordner January 14, 2014 at 12:59 AM Athena does have a temper, but she is good for the world. Thanks for the glimpse into her uncelebrated side Karen. J.A.B.

Rockman Pritts October 18, 2013 at 12:54 AM Without knowing what lies within, beneath or behind, I can only say that this was a pretty good poem. I sense a bit of hostility fueled by anger. Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned. Thanks for the read. Rockman :-) Karen Anglesey October 22, 2013 at 11:36 AM She is a wonder to behold, she is a goddess having a bad hair day ...thank you for commenting.

Debbie Duncan September 17, 2013 at 10:44 AM Awesome poem, I should write more like this ;} Karen Anglesey September 18, 2013 at 6:24 AM Hi Debbie, thank you for the lovely comment :)

Just That Archaic Poet August 19, 2013 at 9:37 PM I swear, I love your style. Your wording is really just spot on. Feels like every single word got special consideration. I am amazed at the talent here; it's totally unlike any other poetry site I've joined. It's obvious that there is a genuine quality to everything you write. Kudos. I am going to enjoy perusing through your poetic portfolio! Karen Anglesey August 19, 2013 at 10:53 PM WOW... I hope I can continue on the same path of impressing the impressionable... thank you so much

Isaiah Zerbst August 15, 2013 at 9:51 AM Great poem here... Lots of tension. I sense a lot of struggle and desperation also. Perfect for the subject of course. Karen Anglesey August 15, 2013 at 10:37 AM Isaiah, thank you for thee feedback. I appreciate your comments :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper August 13, 2013 at 2:18 PM I really like this poem, there's a beauty in it...a deadly women of great power -a definite attraction, adding this one to my favorites list! Great job here! MC Karen Anglesey August 13, 2013 at 6:47 PM Thank you for commenting.. I appreciate your insightful remarks :)

Debbie Duncan August 3, 2013 at 3:37 PM nice write Karen,,,, The Concrete Angel poem I wrote as I was watching " kids with cancer" Karen Anglesey August 3, 2013 at 6:47 PM Debbie, thank you for the thoughtful words...Have a great night :)

Joseph May August 3, 2013 at 12:27 PM very nicely penned Karen....I enjoyed the read Karen Anglesey August 3, 2013 at 6:46 PM Joseph, thank you for the visit. Have a splendid evening

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2013 at 12:40 AM Sure do wish there were no goddess of war!! The last line of this is very fitting! Wasn't Athena a goddess of war? Karen Anglesey August 2, 2013 at 6:38 AM Andrea. This is an observation from experiences with perplexing human behavior...sounds to mythical to be real..i agree :)

Stephen Kilmer July 27, 2013 at 3:04 PM Yikes! The dark side peaks out in a very well written poem. I think I will put on my armor and ride with you to find the key! :=] Stephen Kilmer July 27, 2013 at 3:50 PM Ha! This is one tough old bird. But I will be careful. Never underestimate your friends or enemies. :} Karen Anglesey July 27, 2013 at 3:24 PM Be careful, she may be able to pierce your armor :)

Danesh Morgan July 27, 2013 at 9:51 AM Xena was a queen, you are her Supreme, Arise and Conquer, Beasts of men at whim! Danesh Morgan September 3, 2013 at 1:08 AM came back for a 2of serving. . . i was famished! lols Karen Anglesey July 27, 2013 at 3:24 PM She does sound like she could conquer an army. Thank you for your in depth point of view :)

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 4:23 PM Scary, art imitating life! Karen Anglesey July 12, 2013 at 5:45 PM Richard, yes indeed...thank you :)

Don Johnson July 7, 2013 at 5:00 PM Cloaked in hostility she sputtered and hissed While keeping her life clenched tight in a fist great flow of rhyme right here babe... love it Don Karen Anglesey July 7, 2013 at 7:59 PM Don, thank you for the in depth comments ...very much appreciated :)

Debbie Duncan July 4, 2013 at 2:59 PM very well written Karen ,,,, thank you for liking my Thoughts,,, happy fourth of July ;} Karen Anglesey July 4, 2013 at 5:12 PM Debbie, thank you for commenting. You have such pleasing poetry to read. Have an awesome day :)

Bukang Liwayway July 3, 2013 at 10:56 AM a brave woman indeed..Thanks for sharing this awesome piece friend Karen...thanks for your nice comments on my poem. Have a great day!! Hugs, Maria :) Karen Anglesey July 3, 2013 at 6:42 PM Maria, thank you for the nice comments :)

Richard D Seal July 1, 2013 at 5:36 PM Sounds like one angry lady, thrown away the key, lost the plot, lost the idea of making peace, I wonder. Very well written Karen. I think I've met a few that would fit this vivid description. Take care, Richard Karen Anglesey July 1, 2013 at 5:42 PM Richard, a very fearful and unhappy lady. Anger comes from fear, I suppose, which is also how I see war is formed. A parody between the making of war and exhibiting hostile emotions. Thanks !

Shadow Hamilton July 1, 2013 at 5:33 AM Karen Ty for visiting my work and your lovely comments very inspiring. Goddess of war is an in depth write full of fury luckily caged very good pen Karen Anglesey July 1, 2013 at 5:40 PM Shadow, you are a pleasure to read. Thank you for taking the time to write a detailed viewpoint. :)

Kim Van Breda June 30, 2013 at 6:15 AM A very perceptive insight into a tortured soul. Well written. Karen Anglesey June 30, 2013 at 2:17 PM Kim, tortured soul seems very fitting ... thank you :)

Cherl Dunn June 29, 2013 at 5:26 PM Love this write and thank you for your comment on what if he knew. Karen Anglesey June 30, 2013 at 2:16 PM cherl, thank you for visiting and commenting :)

Poet Tacito June 24, 2013 at 10:17 PM Fantastic! The power & slight ominous vibe from this makes these lines that much more....well...vengeful. Love it! Karen Anglesey June 25, 2013 at 7:21 PM Drake, interesting perspective "vengeful".... I love it that you got that emotion. Thank you !

Allan Koven June 24, 2013 at 8:33 PM Karen, you speak your emotions through your poetry. Can one run away from anger and hostility? No, but one can change the way he/she thinks about things. Even Goddesses have that within their power. Allan Karen Anglesey June 25, 2013 at 7:23 PM Allan, This was written about a former coworker from years ago. Such an angry and critical person whom I befriended, but she wore me out ! I finally did have to walk away unfortunately. Thank you for commenting.