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Feb. 3. 2025
God Walks Warmly Alongside Death Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Justin Bordner

 

As autumn leaves turn crimson and red, ready to fall I lie here exhausted, waiting for my final call. I stare into the approaching ferocious night, And fear the fiend coming to strangle me tight. As my final moments on earth begin to show, My breath becomes shallow, my heartbeats grow slow I feel, the clock ticks faster than ever before And it is time for me to leave this earthly shore. As the last ember of life is about to die out, And the grim reaper has come from his hideout, God, be on my side to give me peace, And make my final journey one of ease. I feel, He is staying close to me at this crucial hour, Telling me- “Don’t fear! I shall be with you for ever. I will be by your side to grant you a peaceful sleep And angels shall be deployed for vigil to keep” When I leave the surly bounds of this earth To Heaven, I will ascend to enjoy perpetual mirth. I am sure, He will carry me in His arms as angels sing, And I will be welcomed by the Heavenly throng.

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Date: 2/7/2025 10:41:00 AM
A very comforting read Valsa.' Its very true there Are evil beings and good beings that wait in death and are active in life to get a hold on us.' If anyone looks up Adam Mulalley and his (washed clean) song they can know more.'
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Date: 2/5/2025 4:42:00 PM
Beautiful for you are being purified into being an Angel of the Living God: ) Romans 8:11 KJVAAE [11] But if the Spirit of him that raised up Jesus from the dead dwell in you, he that raised up Christ from the dead shall also quicken your mortal bodies by his Spirit that dwelleth in you.
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Date: 2/5/2025 3:47:00 PM
Such tender words can only mean God is listening and delivering those who suffer into his Kingdom, great entry dear Valsa gl in the contest :)
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Date: 2/4/2025 6:13:00 AM
Amen,,,Your declaration of devout faith soeaksthe Truth known as achild of God. Daughter, sister, …God bless you! You show your service to Him by sharing, authoring these eloquent lines!……..hugs
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Date: 2/3/2025 6:53:00 PM
It is a serious poem, but one of comfort. May you be young many more years.
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Date: 2/3/2025 12:34:00 PM
This poem is deeply poignant and reflective, capturing the delicate transition from life to eternity with grace and reverence. I love the plea for peace and divine presence. The repetition of faith and reassurance offers a comforting rhythm, making the inevitable feel less daunting. "God, be on my side to give me peace, And make my final journey one of ease. Your words flow with sincerity and hope, creating a piece that soothes even as it stirs. Beautifully written!
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Date: 2/3/2025 10:31:00 AM
A nice last wish poem. As we approach death, we all wish a peaceful end. Emotional and heartfelt poem.
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Date: 2/3/2025 8:13:00 AM
Dear Valsa, this is an exceptional poem on the issue of mortality and the passage from life into death. It represents the introspective mindset we all experience as we near the conclusion of our lives, conveying both fear of death and comfort in divine presence. The theme also includes musings on life, the inevitability of death, and the desire for a peaceful and joyful afterlife. Your word choice conveys a feeling of somberness and meditation by employing vivid images connected with fall and death ("crimson and red," "grim reaper," "last ember of life"). Welcome back; I hope you had a wonderful family tour.
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:55:00 AM
By strange synchronicity, I was thinking similar thoughts and then I read this exquisite poem! A fabulous write, Valsa, thanks for sharing, God bless.
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:44:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your words shows such a sacred passage with such grace, fear and faith entwined in a gentle surrender. There’s such a quiet power in this, a deep comfort woven into every line. Truly moving, my friend. Beautifully written! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/2/2025 11:15:00 PM
this is so emotional , wish you beautiful prayers will be listened , every verse is so intense, send you some light
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Date: 2/2/2025 10:27:00 PM
My favorite verse is the third as it is comforting. This is a great entry! You should do well! Best wishes dear poet!
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