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God Touches Me

My shoulders are blades of flesh, they hold my skinny arms to hands that hold this pen across this page as it reaches the end of a long lived life that was meant to bend fold and remend. But these feet have already left; I can feel it in my chest. These lips want to smile the day away; I have nothing else to say. Knees to my chin, how long has that been? To crouch, cuddle what is now so thin. Press and pull, it all fits in. The warmth and the cool. These toes are not mine, they belong to the sublime. Up my pants you will find my legs spindly; a jelly belly that shakes in my tummy. My thin arms hold loops of skin. They are far away and my head needs covering; but the sun warms my neck and my face is full of laughter because God has reached out his hand to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/11/2012 5:57:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon. God bless you!
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:45:00 AM
Very expressive work...I feel that it is about a person who has some kind of illness or has grown thin in the aging process..Enjoyed the honesty of the work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...The work was for a contest about "Yes, dear"..Imaginary...Sara
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:00:00 AM
Dear Gwendolyn, how perceptive you are. Thank you for not judging and just being there. The hardest part of both living and dying is to just BE. Peace, Gisele
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:45:00 AM
If this poem is written from your perspective in first person, congratulations for being at the end of your journey and running the race well. Lovely poem. Happy V Day.
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