Christopher Flaherty Poet Free verse

God This Feels Great

God this feels Great

Super , smashing , great
I have spaghetti hoops on my plate
And I am still awake way past 8
God this feels great
You see here I am king
They will bring me anything
Have you guessed it yet
I am sleeping over at me Nan's
She melts like butter in my hands
That is why this poem is a dedication to you my biggest fan
My lovely old Nan , I am your greatest fan 
Is there any more food left in the pan

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Doris Culverhouse August 15, 2010 at 7:07 PM great job...I am still smiling...I remember my nannie and mawmaw who are gone now! They treated me special too grandmothers are the best!

Carolyn Devonshire August 14, 2010 at 3:51 PM Oh, how I wish I could find someone like your Nan to wait on me, Christopher. She sounds like she enjoys spoiling you a bit. No wonder you're her greatest fan! Must be nice to be treated like a king. You had me smiling big time! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2010 at 1:35 PM Always tastes better at Nan's house anyway Chris... this one is really sweet and wonderful rhyme on top .. top notch my friend.. flying high in the clouds about now.. trillions of miles above land.. awesome views... but way too long of a flight for energetic me..luv..happy weekend..with luv..

Sara Kendrick August 14, 2010 at 1:06 PM Reads like a wonderful relationship that you have here with Nan...I hope that it is a two way street...Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara