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God This Feels Great

God this feels Great Super , smashing , great I have spaghetti hoops on my plate And I am still awake way past 8 God this feels great You see here I am king They will bring me anything Have you guessed it yet I am sleeping over at me Nan's She melts like butter in my hands That is why this poem is a dedication to you my biggest fan My lovely old Nan , I am your greatest fan Is there any more food left in the pan

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2010 7:07:00 PM

great job...I am still smiling...I remember my nannie and mawmaw who are gone now! They treated me special too grandmothers are the best!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 3:51:00 PM

Oh, how I wish I could find someone like your Nan to wait on me, Christopher. She sounds like she enjoys spoiling you a bit. No wonder you're her greatest fan! Must be nice to be treated like a king. You had me smiling big time! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/14/2010 1:35:00 PM

Always tastes better at Nan's house anyway Chris... this one is really sweet and wonderful rhyme on top .. top notch my friend.. flying high in the clouds about now.. trillions of miles above land.. awesome views... but way too long of a flight for energetic me..luv..happy weekend..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2010 1:06:00 PM

Reads like a wonderful relationship that you have here with Nan...I hope that it is a two way street...Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara