God Saw a Prize

My world a chasm of utter darkness
Dreariness enveloped me like a cloud
Bound by chains in an abandoned fortress
Tormented body -  a field freshly plowed
Accomplishments ignored; voice never heard
Wondered why on earth was I even born
Treated like clipped wings of a fallen bird
Ripped to shreds, I could no longer be torn
Unsettling to be taunted by others
When all you do is exemplify love 
Why is it so hard to love one another
As commanded by the Savior above
I tried so hard to find favor in their sight
All efforts were unfavorably received
I began to pray and was bathed in light
Chains started falling, my sentence reprieved
God looks at me and sees a worthy prize
The Lord loves all of his children the same
I’m no longer concerned about man’s eyes 
Ill-conceived judgments nor secular names
The name of the Lord is a strong tower
His mighty name is worthy to be praised
I thank him for his redemptive power
For being my light on the darkest of days
In times of despair God spoke from above
Through His Word, He counseled and He advised
Keep His commandments - Keep walking in love
I am His, I am loved, and I am a prize!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Jeavons Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Very touching poem. Although you said it is free verse, I enjoyed the rhythm of the rhyme. :)
Vines Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Very inspiring & uplifting write.
Raven Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Hi Valerie, dropping by with belated congratulations on your Poem Of the Day honour with this wonderful write. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Staton Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind response. God bless you and keep you!
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 1:09 AM
Wonderful verse, Valerie. Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve
Staton Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Thank you! I am so pleased you like it.
Warrior Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Superbly done Valerie ...Congrats!!! on POTD!..love & light...^WW^
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thank you so very much. Wishing you a Happy, healthy New Year! God bless you and keep you.
Nicole Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:39 PM
"The Lord loves all of his children the same" I completely agree. This is deep, powerful and emotional. Your thoughts touch my heart. You are such an inspiration to us all. Congratulations Valerie, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Thank you so very much! God bless you and keep you. Happy New Year!
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 12:40 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Valerie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise! Happy New Year!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Your poem expresses beautifully how we are all in the same family and what a blessing it is to know of God's love. Your lovely poem is very deserving of the honor of POTD Valerie. Congratulations! Very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thank you Connie for your warm sentiment. God bless you and keep you!
Doll Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Valerie. So well deserved. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Thank you Warren! Happy New Year!
Ashley Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:53 AM
The journey of your insightful introspective brings us to a beautiful destination, Valerie. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your brilliant poem. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Thank you Susan for such kind words. Wishing you and your love ones a Happy New Year!
Wanter Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Wonderful, inspirational to everyone who might be seen as "different." Congratulations!
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so very much!
Gondolf Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:12 AM
A wonderful poem, Valerie, so glad you found strength in the Lord. Congrats on POTD. John
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thanks you so very much. God bless you!
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Excellent! Congratulations on your honor...
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Thank you so very much. Happy New Year!
Michael Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Yes my dear...A lovely write...Praise be to God...Congratulations Valerie...All the best for 2019
Staton Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much for your kind response. God bless you and keep you!
Sands Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations for POTD Valerie :)
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Thank you my friend. Happy New Year!
Capitano Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:21 AM
Beautifully written, Valerie, people who mistreat others have issues that don't belong to you. Forgiveness is grace and these words prove you have an abundance of that; it is precious.
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Phil. I appreciate your feedback. God bless you and keep you!
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January 2, 2019 at 7:07 AM
Congrats Valerie on POTD--so well deserved!
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you! Happy New Year!
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January 2, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Valerie. Congratulations on POTD...Happy New Year...Charlie
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Thank you Charlie! Your opinion is greatly appreciated. Happy New Year!
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January 2, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Wonderful poem Valerie, congratulations on POTD, happy New Year! xomo
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:45 AM
Thank you so very much for the sentiment. Happy New Year!
May Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:10 AM
well said my friend, congratulations on POTD well deserved for this poem, Happy New Year!!
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Bobby for your reply. Wishing you a blessed New Year.
One Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Brilliant poetry Valerie..
Staton Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, my friend. Happy New Year!
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