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God Save America

In 2020 Kayne West says he plans to run for President
Oh heaven help you all
Kim Kardashian for first lady
I wonder….
Will her first request be
To pain the White House…
PINK
God Bless America 

31st August 2015

americafuturehumorousfree verse

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 16, 2015 at 2:14 AM

Wonderful write n win Jan! Big Congrats !

Jan Allison

September 16, 2015 at 2:50 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

September 15, 2015 at 9:34 PM

I hope it never happens... Hahaha.. congrates hugs eve

Jan Allison

September 16, 2015 at 2:49 AM

Me too Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Sizwe Hlabisa

September 15, 2015 at 4:03 PM

Lol... i hope it never happens... congrats

Jan Allison

September 15, 2015 at 4:13 PM

I hope so too:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

September 15, 2015 at 2:56 PM

Oh my, perish the thought, Jan! Congrats on your placement for this fun write! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

September 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM

LOL Sandra let's hope it NEVER happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

September 15, 2015 at 2:22 PM

Jan, nice win. SKAT

Jan Allison

September 15, 2015 at 2:28 PM

Thanks Skat - let hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

September 15, 2015 at 7:19 AM

A pink white house, now that would be a hoot...thank you for adding this neat little write into my contest Hugs xx

Jan Allison

September 15, 2015 at 11:30 AM

Its a recent poem in August Cas so one of my least commented on writes so it is great to get more exposure via your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

September 15, 2015 at 6:12 AM

Great write Jan. A well deserved win. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

September 15, 2015 at 11:29 AM

Thanks so much Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Ettie Christian-Bowling

September 10, 2015 at 9:31 PM

Oh my goodness with the way the world is today I would not be surprised at all ....Lord have mercy on us its a strange possibility who knows...Nice write lolz-Love Ettie

Jan Allison

September 11, 2015 at 2:49 AM

Lets hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

September 8, 2015 at 6:16 PM

You are just too funny. We are in the process of being taken over by something strange.

Jan Allison

September 9, 2015 at 1:04 AM

Thanks Duke I love to write with humour and this story couldn't pass me by - gosh it would be a nightmare:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

September 7, 2015 at 2:41 AM

Well thats if I am not arrested tonight, if I am here tomorrow I guess is ok! LOL

Jan Allison

September 7, 2015 at 8:20 AM

I hope you are always around my friend soup would be a very dull place without you:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

September 7, 2015 at 2:37 AM

Oh Don't you go worrying yourself about saving America, Donald trump is here!!!! and when I assassinate him, I will save America!!!! LOL Loved this!

Jan Allison

September 7, 2015 at 8:20 AM

LOl King Arthur will rise again:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

September 3, 2015 at 7:44 AM

pink is lovely... JAmes said I look really pretty in pink.. weeew! but white house in pink wahhhhhh! :D!!! !~Olive Eloisa =')

Jan Allison

September 3, 2015 at 7:48 AM

LOlL you are a stunner whatever you wear Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

September 1, 2015 at 5:21 PM

Funny one, Jan! I sincerely hope it won't get as bad as this!! :)

Jan Allison

September 1, 2015 at 5:26 PM

Let's hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

September 1, 2015 at 9:58 AM

Heard one Republican candidate suggest they put up a wall between the U.S. and Canada (approx. 5,000 mi???) If he gets elected, I will be one of the first on the work crew!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx

Arthur Vaso

September 7, 2015 at 2:39 AM

Well its a serious matter, no joke, why I heard late at night a few Canadian pine trees are sneaking across the border!!

Jan Allison

September 1, 2015 at 1:33 PM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

August 31, 2015 at 4:29 PM

Hahaha! This is nightmarish, Jan! If she makes it there every US president will be turning in his grave! As for wasps, they still give me the creeps to this day. Never got stung by one, mostly what we call yellow jackets. Thanks for the stop by and best to you. / M

Jan Allison

August 31, 2015 at 4:36 PM

It really doesn't bear thinking about - tongue in cheek humour ... but you can just imagine it can't you. I too have never been stung by a wasp -I still detest them:-( Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

August 31, 2015 at 3:19 PM

yayyy... and miley cyrus as VP; now we have an MTV oval office!.. so enjoyed, jan!.. huggs

Jan Allison

August 31, 2015 at 3:36 PM

Just a fun write Nette - if they can have a publicity stunt I will get a poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak

August 31, 2015 at 10:26 AM

Dear JAN, LOL!! nice... enjoyed the humour.....In India we have pink city called jaipur(state of Rajasthan) because of most of its buildings painted pink i just remembered.....but White house in pink........GOD should save! it ll never happen...love, Anu:)

Jan Allison

August 31, 2015 at 11:34 AM

Tongue in cheek humour here but I can JUST imagine it happening lol:-) hugs Jan xx