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God Save America

In 2020 Kayne West says he plans to run for President
Oh heaven help you all
Kim Kardashian for first lady
I wonder….
Will her first request be
To pain the White House…
PINK
God Bless America 

31st August 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/16/2015 2:14:00 AM Wonderful write n win Jan! Big Congrats ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/16/2015 2:50:00 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 9/15/2015 9:34:00 PM I hope it never happens... Hahaha.. congrates hugs eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/16/2015 2:49:00 AM Me too Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Sizwe Hlabisa Date: 9/15/2015 4:03:00 PM Lol... i hope it never happens... congrats Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2015 4:13:00 PM I hope so too:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 9/15/2015 2:56:00 PM Oh my, perish the thought, Jan! Congrats on your placement for this fun write! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2015 3:00:00 PM LOL Sandra let's hope it NEVER happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A Date: 9/15/2015 2:22:00 PM Jan, nice win. SKAT Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2015 2:28:00 PM Thanks Skat - let hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 9/15/2015 7:19:00 AM A pink white house, now that would be a hoot...thank you for adding this neat little write into my contest Hugs xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2015 11:30:00 AM Its a recent poem in August Cas so one of my least commented on writes so it is great to get more exposure via your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor Date: 9/15/2015 6:12:00 AM Great write Jan. A well deserved win. Congratulations. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2015 11:29:00 AM Thanks so much Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Ettie Christian-Bowling Date: 9/10/2015 9:31:00 PM Oh my goodness with the way the world is today I would not be surprised at all ....Lord have mercy on us its a strange possibility who knows...Nice write lolz-Love Ettie Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/11/2015 2:49:00 AM Lets hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort Date: 9/8/2015 6:16:00 PM You are just too funny. We are in the process of being taken over by something strange. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/9/2015 1:04:00 AM Thanks Duke I love to write with humour and this story couldn't pass me by - gosh it would be a nightmare:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/7/2015 2:41:00 AM Well thats if I am not arrested tonight, if I am here tomorrow I guess is ok! LOL Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/7/2015 8:20:00 AM I hope you are always around my friend soup would be a very dull place without you:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/7/2015 2:37:00 AM Oh Don't you go worrying yourself about saving America, Donald trump is here!!!! and when I assassinate him, I will save America!!!! LOL Loved this! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/7/2015 8:20:00 AM LOl King Arthur will rise again:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 9/3/2015 7:44:00 AM pink is lovely... JAmes said I look really pretty in pink.. weeew! but white house in pink wahhhhhh! :D!!! !~Olive Eloisa =') Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/3/2015 7:48:00 AM LOlL you are a stunner whatever you wear Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser Date: 9/1/2015 5:21:00 PM Funny one, Jan! I sincerely hope it won't get as bad as this!! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/1/2015 5:26:00 PM Let's hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison Date: 9/1/2015 9:58:00 AM Heard one Republican candidate suggest they put up a wall between the U.S. and Canada (approx. 5,000 mi???) If he gets elected, I will be one of the first on the work crew!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 9/7/2015 2:39:00 AM Well its a serious matter, no joke, why I heard late at night a few Canadian pine trees are sneaking across the border!! Jan Allison Date: 9/1/2015 1:33:00 PM LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler Date: 8/31/2015 4:29:00 PM Hahaha! This is nightmarish, Jan! If she makes it there every US president will be turning in his grave! As for wasps, they still give me the creeps to this day. Never got stung by one, mostly what we call yellow jackets. Thanks for the stop by and best to you. / M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/31/2015 4:36:00 PM It really doesn't bear thinking about - tongue in cheek humour ... but you can just imagine it can't you. I too have never been stung by a wasp -I still detest them:-( Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/31/2015 3:19:00 PM yayyy... and miley cyrus as VP; now we have an MTV oval office!.. so enjoyed, jan!.. huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/31/2015 3:36:00 PM Just a fun write Nette - if they can have a publicity stunt I will get a poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak Date: 8/31/2015 10:26:00 AM Dear JAN, LOL!! nice... enjoyed the humour.....In India we have pink city called jaipur(state of Rajasthan) because of most of its buildings painted pink i just remembered.....but White house in pink........GOD should save! it ll never happen...love, Anu:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/31/2015 11:34:00 AM Tongue in cheek humour here but I can JUST imagine it happening lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor Date: 8/31/2015 5:49:00 AM Good Humor, mixed with sarcasm. Enjoyed reading Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/31/2015 5:56:00 AM Let's hope it never happens lol:-) hugs Jan xx