God Mode

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gregory Richard Barden.

            I'm now in god mode

       Explanation, if you will

   That I have the power

 To give life or take it

We all do, in our way

 Aside, only one force

   That transcends time

       I will love you forever

            Not one ... second ... more.





(This is NOT religious statement of any kind, it is about the emotional power
 some people hold over others, and the ambiguities of the only thing that
 refutes it).

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2019 10:48:00 PM

this is really cool. A bit deep, but I think I kind of get it!! Love that weird ending!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/20/2019 2:05:00 AM

Thank you VERY much, Andrea, I so appreciate that ... fifty hits before any comment, (not good stats), but I hoped someone would "get" it eventually. I am very proud of this powerful, layered statement about human interaction and emotional abuse, and knowing that you found it worthy means a great deal to me ... makes writing it worthwhile. Blessings, my dear friend! :-) <3