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God Inside Out

A wandering waif walks seeking God in the wind and tide A wondering soul seeks waking a love of God inside. The wind that kisses chastened cheeks an infant thought inside, the sea that cleanses misery the gifts that are outside. Each kindness shows the God within to whom we can confide and universal starlight brings dual values to collide. Exploding now within the hide in which we all abide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/29/2012 7:10:00 PM
Debbie, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in Brian's contest..xox~PD
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Date: 3/27/2012 4:31:00 PM
congrats Debbie on a marvelous win for these excellent words of poetry luv.. makes one think deeply and intently too..luv..
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Date: 3/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
spiritual delight, debbie.. congrats bi g time..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/27/2012 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie!!! on your win in Brian's contest!! big huggsss,love~deb
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Date: 3/27/2012 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful message penned Deb. Sorry I have not been here much as I have been ill. Just starting to feel a bit better but still not up to par. Thank you for my placement in your contest. love phyl
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:50:00 PM
What a beautiful, stirring message you give here, Debbie! Wow, you sure are churning out your metered poems wonderfully! I especially loved your 1st and 2nd stanzas and Aww shucks! You don't know how giddy happy, honored I am with my wonderful wonderful placement in your meter contest!! And what you said there in my sonnet was SO sweet, thank you! ^_^ That win was huge for me, thank you So much!! hugs to you!! :D
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:01:00 PM
I give you a 7 on this one. Don't worry about your judging. I knew I had the meter down but there are other aspects a judge looks at. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:33:00 AM
Ahhh.! Debbie well put words, much to lift the soul here" i could go on..! " however i find it better by far to just read"
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:53:00 PM
Wind that kiss.....the wind here Debbie is icecold. :) Lovely poem Debbie! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/3/2012 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful ... simply beautiful. Honors both the Creator and his children.
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