God Forgives

Have you ever felt hopeless? Thinking there's no one to care. Is there someone in your past? At whose memory you stare. Don't take the hide off yourself Or think perhaps your not decent. For mistakes you have made Even if they've been most recent. For we spend our entire lives Wrestling with thorns in our flesh. For the good seed and bad Are two that never will mesh. And you can love other people Though one day they've hurt you. Like we hurt God each day In things we've said or failed to do. We all face temptations daily Of one stripe or another. God was tempted but sinned not Nor tempts he any other. Though we try hard as we may To live a committed life above sin; While in this earthly body We're inclined to mess up again. Written for a special friend, Shirlene
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Horsch Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 8:48 AM
I just love how you write. Another good one....Roger
Joseph Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations on having this moving poem featured. I am not that accomplished at forgiveness.
Mckenzie Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Tom~ Great message and flow CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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April 9, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. GBU. Ernilando
Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 3:09 AM
Very impressive write that is a testimony to your faith....Glad that it was on the featured page...Keep the faith pen flowing...Sara
Brown Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Tom. Love, Carol
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April 7, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week.. I wish we all could have Forgiveness like talked about in your poem. Gods Forgiveness is the Best of all. Rhonda Hero
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April 7, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Excellent poem on Gods wondrous Mercy, Tom. Glad it was featured poem this week or I would have missed this one. Congratulations to you. -Robert
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April 5, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 4, 2010 at 4:04 PM
So much truth in your words. Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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April 4, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Tom, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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