God Forgiver of All Ills

Oh God, forgiver of all ills,
To thee we lift one voice;
Through thee, our reason is instilled,
Our wills, granted free choice.

Upon the cross on Calvary,
Thy only Son forgave
The errors of humanity;
Our weakened souls, he saved.

Thy justice is all-merciful,
Rewarding self-control,
Then sparing tortures that befall
The sloth of weak, impassioned souls.

Thy heavens turn in symmetry,
To follow thy design,
The world obeys the Almighty,
For all power is thine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 6, 2014 at 10:23 PM
ALEXANDRA,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Congratulations Alexandra xx
Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Nice Rhyme and message is great. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Reese Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Very well done. The message is right on and the rhyme and meter are quite good too making the message stronger. 1 suggestion though replace the 2 "and" that start lines 8 and 11 with more words. Other then that a very solid poem.
Romanyshyn Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:49 PM
I completely agree with your critique. Thanks!
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