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God Forgiver of All Ills

Oh God, forgiver of all ills, To thee we lift one voice; Through thee, our reason is instilled, Our wills, granted free choice. Upon the cross on Calvary, Thy only Son forgave The errors of humanity; Our weakened souls, he saved. Thy justice is all-merciful, Rewarding self-control, Then sparing tortures that befall The sloth of weak, impassioned souls. Thy heavens turn in symmetry, To follow thy design, The world obeys the Almighty, For all power is thine.

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Date: 8/6/2014 10:23:00 PM
ALEXANDRA,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2014 2:20:00 AM
Congratulations Alexandra xx
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Date: 8/1/2014 12:14:00 AM
Nice Rhyme and message is great. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/29/2014 8:46:00 PM
Very well done. The message is right on and the rhyme and meter are quite good too making the message stronger. 1 suggestion though replace the 2 "and" that start lines 8 and 11 with more words. Other then that a very solid poem.
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Alexandra Romanyshyn
Date: 7/29/2014 8:49:00 PM
I completely agree with your critique. Thanks!

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