Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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God Bless

out on a tangent she sings offbeat
and dances to a different drummer
she's in a world that’s gone askew
god bless her soul

loneliness has ravaged her inside
left her heart an open wound
in pain and dire need of love
dried up I see her slowly dying

she’s out of sync in agony
craving to find a special someone
most times she's given up
thinking anyone may be out there

there's got to be
there has to be
god bless her soul
she has a heart of gold



Read on air by invitation  ~  February 27, 2021  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 16, 2021 at 6:23 AM I hope she knows God loves those in her shoes, and she is never alone, just feels alone Line Gauthier February 16, 2021 at 8:36 AM Breaks my heart to know there are people who have never known love. Losing a loved one is one thing but to never have known love... now that's sad

Annette Hershey February 15, 2021 at 2:27 PM I hope her heart of gold finds peace. It is sad to watch someone suffer in loneliness. I feel this poem in my heart, very well written, Annette Line Gauthier February 15, 2021 at 3:48 PM Thank you so much, Annette. Most appreciated ~

Bj Legros Kelley February 15, 2021 at 10:57 AM She is blessed to be seen by you, and may our eyes be opened to each of those touched deeply by such pain. Your heart must touch her somehow, even through the care that touched you to write this poem, it is love sublime, and I pray God blesses her soul as well as the many others suffering. You have a beautiful heart. Line Gauthier February 15, 2021 at 12:15 PM You are so kind, BJ. God bless you ~

Christopher Flaherty February 15, 2021 at 9:14 AM Great poem Line Both beautiful lovely and poignant . Lonliness is indeed a silent killer. God bless all who suffer on silence. And thanks again for your lovely kind comments Christopher Flaherty February 15, 2021 at 10:09 AM Cheers my pleasure Line Line Gauthier February 15, 2021 at 9:18 AM Thanks, Christopher ~ much appreciated

Quoth Theraven February 14, 2021 at 3:37 PM Line, Yes, God bless. Lots to think about when you watch all that water flowing under the bridge. We all have to cross it, there's no going back. Happy Valentine's Day Line. -Richard Line Gauthier February 14, 2021 at 4:08 PM So true, Richard ~

Darlene De Beaulieu February 14, 2021 at 11:05 AM Hello Lin, She has a heart of gold. I hope she finds what she is looking for. Hugs Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu February 14, 2021 at 3:59 PM Lin it would be better for her to find peace in her heart. Enjoy your evening my friend. Line Gauthier February 14, 2021 at 11:41 AM I'd be happy if she at least found peace in her heart ~ so sad