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God It took a while Years indeed To figure out life Death and mans human greed Like all good things Effort and many blooming springs Tears from mountain tops Into valleys green where love brings God is simply the human voice That sings of sadness or rejoice Music from the human mind There is nothing as humble and so so kind Now some would ask “but I can not sing” Gods charm comes that you can hear the echoes ring A singer needs an ear to hear So you see, we are all God if we choose not to fear This is why many man made Gods exist In the minds of the religious only theirs is true God knows its about love not any religious view So remember to rejoice and sing no matter in what pew Do no harm to your fellow man Break bread with those who have no lamb When a guest knocks on your door Sing a song, the voice of God for sure Is all that merciful hearts will understand

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Date: 4/26/2017 10:44:00 PM
Very nice, the God That We Know is Man's invention. The true god cannot be comprehend with our three dimensional mind . Pantheism might be the closest thing that explains God.
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Date: 4/28/2017 10:57:00 PM
Thank you Pashang! I see you are a wise man!
Date: 3/26/2017 9:25:00 AM
There is much to ponder here Arthur. I do feel there is a danger in placing ourselves in Gods place. We live in a society of self worship and as a result there is profound sadness.
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Date: 3/26/2017 2:51:00 PM
Kindness to others, doing no harm to others, and sharing happiness with others, in no way contradicts that, if one does those things, is for sure not self worship, I was only implying it doesn't matter what God one wishes to worship, there are many paths to goodness! :)
Date: 3/13/2017 9:38:00 AM
Truth rings in your ears...Only the damned do not hear for they have only one voice to appease and that is their own.
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Date: 3/26/2017 2:48:00 PM
Very very well said Tim! :)
Date: 3/13/2017 6:59:00 AM
Its indeed beautiful when we can find God in the others good deeds.Indeed God lives within us. Fantastic dear Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Charmaine!!!!
Date: 3/13/2017 1:40:00 AM
Fabulous write encompassing everyone in Gods love. If only us mere mortal's could all live in love.
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Date: 3/26/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 3/13/2017 1:01:00 AM
That is a beautiful poem, because that love is for everyone. I like it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/26/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Darren!

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