Notes About The Poem

Never tried a wave format before. Quite enjoyed it!

God

God
music
love
blessing.
Hypocrites
judging
hate
gossip
venomous.
Fleeing to dark
condemning
worthless
God?
Jesus.
I forgive.
New life.
Light.
Healing.
God.

6/11/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Robertson Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Excellent Cindi.
A  Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Cindi, love the waltzing message, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:32 PM
Nice how the first word became the last word! Congrats in the contest.
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Cindi, congrats on your placement in my contest! A faith filled write! Well done! Love, Kim
Timperley Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 1:06 PM
This is life. Begins with and ends with God. We make a hash of the middle. Thank God for the two ends. God Bless. D.
A   Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:39 AM
I love the message and ending. God has a wonderful part... LINDA
Rockwell Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Yes He does! Thanks.
Christian Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:44 PM
He is a healing and forgiving God. Good write
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