Antakia Rose Poet Free verse

God

God is patient just like
little children waiting
to be born,

God is quiet just like
the wind blowing
through the trees,

God is loving just like
parents loving their children,

God is caring just like
people are for each other.


25 July 2012

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gordon Mcconnell March 10, 2020 at 11:41 AM Lovely piece Antakia, bringing out some of God's attributes so well. Blessings, Gordon

Roland Dust February 28, 2020 at 9:51 PM Not bad, it reminds of me of that bible verse, "JEsus didnt come in the fire or storm but in the gentle wind." Your poem is beautiful and reflects that! Antakia Rose March 7, 2020 at 12:38 PM Thank you. I certainly tried to bring in the gentle nature of God.

J. I. Thomas F. February 28, 2020 at 8:47 PM a beautiful piece; thanks for sharing! Antakia Rose March 7, 2020 at 12:38 PM Thank you!