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God-Fatherism: I

the cape of fanfare vampires raw rampage for a common slavery.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2009 9:41:00 AM

last line..form of common slavery?? Canny it should be 5/7/5 soup mail

Canny Amah

Date: 10/22/2009 10:14:00 PM

Kill poetic innovation? Shakespeare got us the Elizabethan sonnet out of the Italian sonnet … I trust, that’s what has happened to have most new sub-genres of poetry & other forms of literary art … & what I don’t understand, I don’t comment on! This subject has been heated-up in my part of the world, nothing mis-leading about it … it has razed our communities here … pls educate me more. Smile!!! Canny.

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/22/2009 5:37:00 PM

extreamly misleading.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/22/2009 2:46:00 PM

Alright. Good poem but pls consider 5/7/5 cylab and re-entry...please as: The cape of fanfare, vampires raw rampage, for a common slavery. I'm looking forward to reading more of your beautiful poetry.