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Gobsmacked, Bamboozled and Confused

Gobsmacked, bamboozled and confused — how to get one day back. Imagine if one day was robbed of all its good and bad? Perhaps a wedding, now she’s a virgin again- he doesn’t remember the present he unwrapped last night. Or a baby sucking its thumb back in the darkest womb - what happened to the light? You remember the terror of jaws chewing off your limb but no one else knows why you won’t go for a swim. Your first “A” lost - they still think you’re a loser though you studied bad. The screaming plays over and over and over again though your parents don’t know why you’re mad. The car you had fixed has a dent and the love you finally won has been lost. Gobsmacked, bamboozled, confused as the day. Judge Judy pounds her hammer, your protest’s overruled. Your afraid to make a move...will it happen again? There’s no one to ask! 10/21/2018 GOBSMACKS, BAMBOOZLES AND CONFUSES ME Poetry Contest Sponsor - Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 11/11/2018 10:24:00 PM
Awesome , congratulations on your win... if I could get that one day back :(
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2018 1:44:00 PM
Yes! Thank you, Eve!
Date: 11/11/2018 4:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2018 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 10/29/2018 9:14:00 AM
Whew, powerful! Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 10/27/2018 3:30:00 PM
This is indeed a confusing, bamboozled, gobsmacked whirlwind - sure it will do well!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2018 5:57:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
Date: 10/25/2018 10:40:00 PM
I love the last line (lol) Enjoyed this Kim...Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/26/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thanks, Charles!
Date: 10/25/2018 10:56:00 AM
I'm scratching my head lol, you've left me confused too. Good luck Kim. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 11:54:00 AM
:) Thanks!
Date: 10/25/2018 9:29:00 AM
Wow, now that is cool collection of contradictions. That was one weird day that definitely left me confused. : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 9:52:00 AM
LOL! You’re making me laugh today! Caren likes a crazy write!

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