Gobsmacked, Bamboozled and Confused

Gobsmacked, bamboozled and confused
— how to get one day back.
Imagine if one day was robbed of all its good and bad?
Perhaps a wedding, now she’s a virgin again-
he doesn’t remember the present he unwrapped last night.
Or a baby sucking its thumb back in the darkest womb -
what happened to the light?
You remember the terror of jaws chewing off your limb
but no one else knows why you won’t go for a swim.
Your first “A” lost - they still think you’re a loser
though you studied bad.
The screaming plays over and over and over again
though your parents don’t know why you’re mad.
The car you had fixed has a dent and the love
you finally won has been lost.
Gobsmacked, bamboozled,
confused as the day.
Judge Judy pounds her hammer,
your protest’s overruled.
Your afraid to make a move...will it happen again?
There’s no one to ask!

10/21/2018
GOBSMACKS, BAMBOOZLES AND CONFUSES ME  Poetry Contest
Sponsor -  Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Awesome , congratulations on your win... if I could get that one day back :(
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Yes! Thank you, Eve!
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 4:52 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Line!
Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Whew, powerful! Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Faulkner Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 3:30 PM
This is indeed a confusing, bamboozled, gobsmacked whirlwind - sure it will do well!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
Messina Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:40 PM
I love the last line (lol) Enjoyed this Kim...Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 4:33 AM
Thanks, Charles!
Cunningham Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:56 AM
I'm scratching my head lol, you've left me confused too. Good luck Kim. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:54 AM
:) Thanks!
Green Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Wow, now that is cool collection of contradictions. That was one weird day that definitely left me confused. : )
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 9:52 AM
LOL! You’re making me laugh today! Caren likes a crazy write!
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