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Goblins' Dance

Solid cover of morn's damp dew Looks frosty 'pon mown grass Jets have traversed the eastern sky Leaving white streaks where passed The rising sun has cast some pink There's sand 'pon the low clouds A mysterious fog hides the hills Where goblins gather in crowds They roast marshmallows in the night Play, sing, and dance with glee Dare the owls to sing who, who, who At the rising sun flee Contest: Everything Halloween Sponsor: Russell Sivey September 12, 2013

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Date: 9/22/2013 11:25:00 AM
very nicely written with imaginative thoughts in lines, and Thank You for visiting my words, I wish I had more time to be around, though work and life keeps me unreasonably busy, which is good and bad. Cecil
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:51:00 AM
wow i love all the hidden things wonderful
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:19:00 PM
Happy Halloween! You pay a nice tribute here and ths poem is quite evocative. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/12/2013 2:11:00 PM
This was a very whimsical Halloween poem! Very enjoyable to read. Nicely done, Sara! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind comments!
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:33:00 AM
Oh those goblins! Enjoyed the read..I love Halloween..BG
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Date: 9/12/2013 6:52:00 AM
- A nice magical morning.... enjoyed your poem !!! - Luck in contest, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:58:00 AM
Wow, this is a very awesome write my friend! If this is for my contest, sorry about that, I read this poem, and I really enjoyed reading it too! I believe you meant goblins to be something else than the actual meaning of goblins, like children maybe :)! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a beautiful piece, Great Work!!
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