Gobble Gobble

<                                           cobblestone streets where she strolls
                                             waiting looking  for her next clients
                                             lip stick skirt blouse boots she fluffs hair
                                             horn's blair people's stare all fair game
                                             waiting looking for her next clients
                                             dim lit streets she turns her head for another
                                             horn's blair people's stare all fair game
                                             liars cheaters she don't care
                                             waiting looking for her next clients
                                             lip stick skirt blouse boots she fluffs hair
                                             dim lit streets she  turns her head for another
                                             cobblestone streets where she strolls

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Date: 8/22/2010 6:15:00 AM
excellent Katherine!!!
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:49:00 PM
I really like this, Katherine. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your 1st Place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congrtas Stella, for first place in my contest
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:49:00 PM
shiver...a right awful nightmare so real...hard...almost bleeding good job geting the reader into the characters mind! Congrad's on your #1! Light & Love
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:53:00 PM
Very well written..liked the title too. Congrats on your 1st place..BG
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine, on this provocative winning poem!! Well done!!
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:18:00 AM
Major congrats Katherine on your first place win in Dr. Ram's contest Pantoum Me .. with this amazing and entertaining write.. enjoy your big win this happy Sunday my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:55:00 PM
so sad...a wasted life....
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Date: 8/5/2010 9:02:00 PM
Luv this Katherine.. good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram... very creative and original on an age old theme of those lady of the evening.. good luck my friend... with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 5:56:00 PM
Thanks, for supporting my contest, Katherine
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:27:00 AM
Interesting write Katherine, felt like I was standing on a corner watching the scene play out.. enjoyed this, if for the contest, best wishes ~ Wilma
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