Goal

Defense. He left them there, flyin' cross the green grass like a hare shot from a cannon to SCORE!

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Date: 1/1/2016 12:12:00 PM

KEITH, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/1/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thank you my dear! Happy New Year to you to... Best wishes, Keith

Date: 1/1/2016 4:02:00 AM

Wonderful cinquain Keith. Great rhythm and feeling for the subject. I particularly like the line, 'like a hare shot from a canon'. Best, Nigel

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/1/2016 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Nigel! That's a real compliment comin' from the Master of the Form!! Best wishes, Keith

Date: 12/31/2015 8:58:00 PM

Nice! I will have to try my hand at that too. I like that....like a hare shot from a cannon. Great job!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/31/2015 11:25:00 PM

Thanks Sweetie... much appreciated. K.

Date: 12/31/2015 7:13:00 PM

The imagery made me smile Keith:-) happy New year:-) hugs jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/31/2015 7:16:00 PM

The first Time I have EVER tried a CINQUAIN! Thanks for being so kind. Best wishes, Keith