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Go Wooden Pony

Each one rides a stick.
Delighted children gallop.
Go, wooden pony.

Form: The TROIKA- (Haiku with hooves)

1/7/2017

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John Michaels

Date: 2/16/2017 1:20:00 PM

Excellent! This one made me smile :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/14/2017 10:32:00 PM

A very relatable childhood memory. Lovely Haiku, Dane. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:21:00 PM

Thank you for stopping to leave your congratulations and for sharing in the memory. Smiles, Dane Ann

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2017 6:29:00 PM

Love those wooden ponies :) Congrats, Dane!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:20:00 PM

Thank you, Kin, for stopping to leave your congratulations. Yes, those wooden ponies bring back some memories! Smiles, Dane Ann

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2017 3:59:00 PM

Congrats on your win Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:18:00 PM

Thank you for stopping to leave your congratulations. Smiles, Dane Ann

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/14/2017 3:09:00 PM

congrats in your win, Dane Ann.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:18:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes, for stopping to leave your congratulations. Smiles, Dane Ann

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/14/2017 2:57:00 PM

Smiles, remembering a wooden broomstick pony, I made for my grandson. He still has it. Congrats on a fine troika here.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/16/2017 7:17:00 PM

Thank you for stopping with your congratulations and for sharing your memories with me. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

John Lawless

Date: 1/14/2017 1:27:00 PM

Ah, the legendary "Broom Handle" pony, if you were lucky you got a sock on the end so it would have a head. and you had to provide your own sound effects. Thanks for entering the contest Dane, love this little trip down memory lane.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/14/2017 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, John, for choosing me to place in your contest. Yes, I also had fun writing this and remember childhood fun. Hugs and Smiles, Dane Ann

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2017 7:23:00 PM

Oh i used to love riding on carousels Dane Ann:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/8/2017 10:43:00 AM

Thank you. Yes, carousels are great fun, too. I even painted a picture of one when I was studying art. It had no people on it, which makes a statement. But it was an accidental statement because I left them off due to inability to paint faces back then. LOL Hugs, Dane Ann