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Go Wooden Pony

Each one rides a stick.
Delighted children gallop.
Go, wooden pony.

Form: The TROIKA- (Haiku with hooves)

1/7/2017

childhoodnostalgiahaiku

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John Michaels

February 16, 2017 at 1:20 PM

Excellent! This one made me smile :)

Afzal Nusker

January 14, 2017 at 10:32 PM

A very relatable childhood memory. Lovely Haiku, Dane. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 16, 2017 at 7:21 PM

Thank you for stopping to leave your congratulations and for sharing in the memory. Smiles, Dane Ann

Kim Rodrigues

January 14, 2017 at 6:29 PM

Love those wooden ponies :) Congrats, Dane!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 16, 2017 at 7:20 PM

Thank you, Kin, for stopping to leave your congratulations. Yes, those wooden ponies bring back some memories! Smiles, Dane Ann

Joseph May

January 14, 2017 at 3:59 PM

Congrats on your win Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 16, 2017 at 7:18 PM

Thank you for stopping to leave your congratulations. Smiles, Dane Ann

Agnes Krampe

January 14, 2017 at 3:09 PM

congrats in your win, Dane Ann.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 16, 2017 at 7:18 PM

Thank you, Agnes, for stopping to leave your congratulations. Smiles, Dane Ann

Reason A. Poteet

January 14, 2017 at 2:57 PM

Smiles, remembering a wooden broomstick pony, I made for my grandson. He still has it. Congrats on a fine troika here.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 16, 2017 at 7:17 PM

Thank you for stopping with your congratulations and for sharing your memories with me. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

John Lawless

January 14, 2017 at 1:27 PM

Ah, the legendary "Broom Handle" pony, if you were lucky you got a sock on the end so it would have a head. and you had to provide your own sound effects. Thanks for entering the contest Dane, love this little trip down memory lane.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 14, 2017 at 2:09 PM

Thank you, John, for choosing me to place in your contest. Yes, I also had fun writing this and remember childhood fun. Hugs and Smiles, Dane Ann

Jan Allison

January 7, 2017 at 7:23 PM

Oh i used to love riding on carousels Dane Ann:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 8, 2017 at 10:43 AM

Thank you. Yes, carousels are great fun, too. I even painted a picture of one when I was studying art. It had no people on it, which makes a statement. But it was an accidental statement because I left them off due to inability to paint faces back then. LOL Hugs, Dane Ann

Go Wooden Pony

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