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Go With the Flow

Have you peeled the flesh of day the way it looks into your pained face? Cuddle the heart, let it be content in going with life’s flow allowing rafters of gratitude to claim a lilting start; in mellow traces unbound by grief for dreams to glow. Lift the rhapsody of fireflies greeting your skirt with beads of smiles running with feet on a spree, fling the moment around, taste its wine or sleep on it; this is the day simply meant to be free billowing on skies made of renewed hope so godly lit. For SKAT's Rhyming Poems Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/7/2012 5:16:00 PM
Nette, a beautiful statement of renewal, let go and begin anew with a fresh positive outlook. I like the upbeat mood, but you always enrapture the reader with such gorgeous imagery. Well done, and congratulations.
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:20:00 AM
congrats Nedtte luv on a wonderful win for letting go.. always amazing my friend.. having computer woes last two days..oh..
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:07:00 AM
a typical NETTE CLASSIC!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!congrats on the placement in the "letting go" contest......~sashi
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lisa's "Letting Go" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2012 11:56:00 AM
wow...I love this poem... and Lisa, is super awesome... i want to collab with her one day.. adding this to my faves... and by the way Nette... your super amazing yourself... and your poems, are always outstanding...luv~ always* your little PD **
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:23:00 AM
oh thankxx sweet Nette .. that was the word.. oh sometimes I am truly a wacky blond girl.. oh..
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Date: 4/2/2012 5:26:00 PM
Beautiful poem Nette , best of luck in the contest , Hugs , Declan xx
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:15:00 PM
lovely as always Nette luv.. a montage of precious words of invitation .. this contest was so unique and so many different entries on the theme.. of course this one is my fav to win top spot luv.. good lucdk..luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 2:01:00 PM
i love this beauty, nette
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