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The 1950's in Boston Ma....quite a different experience than todays mayhem.  My thanks to Charles Messina as his "Add a Stanza" contest spurred this visit to a simpler time in my life.

Go on Back....

Sit among the dandelions
listen to the bees
thank the broken pavement
for the scars upon my knees

walk along three decker canyons
in a sticky August haze
hop within the hopscotch chalk
a dance form to amaze

hit some rocks with a long flat stick
raise hands shouting “Going, going gone”
throw some rocks at a lily pad
in a muddy road side pond

catch a frog, chase butterflies
play fetch with a mongrel dog
use your fingers as a net
and chase the pollywogs

run a stick along a picket fence
hear a train in the slow “click-clack”
pull the cord, blow the whistle
“All aboard” we’re going back…..


John G. Lawless
©7/23/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/13/2018 7:42:00 PM
G'day John … when catching up with childhood friends, most of the conversation is based on nostalgia, and your poem did this too - thank you John
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Date: 7/27/2018 12:08:00 AM
Childhood days are so simple to enjoy. I can feel recollecting my own childhood. Warm wishes.
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Date: 7/23/2018 9:20:00 PM
Oh the nostalgia is beautiful, John. A poem that's felt rather than just read. I just love the spirit of your piece especially the last glorious line. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/24/2018 9:11:00 AM
Indeed!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Susan, we sometimes romanticize the past but there are some genuine "moments" that can still tip us to longing for a return.
Date: 7/23/2018 10:26:00 AM
Great one John! I felt like I was right there. :)
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, glad you enjoyed the trip....
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