Sotto Poet Poet Limerick

Go get a room

Written: August 7, 2026 for a contest sponsored by Margarita Lillico
Checked by: HMS.COM / 10/10/6/6/10
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"Go get a room!" quacked the duck in the pond
at two clouds drifting dreamily beyond
They're cuddling in the sky
a beetle chirped nearby
Let them hover—for that bond, they're renowned.

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Kim Rodrigues August 12, 2026 at 7:25 AM Love the personification of the duck in the pond and his pensiveness. And the beetle falls into the act, enjoying the cuddling duo. Nicely done!

sara Etgen-Baker August 8, 2026 at 4:48 PM clever Limerick. 😊

Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2026 at 6:45 AM - Lovely poem, Las :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 7, 2026 at 1:36 PM What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...........

Hiya Sharma August 7, 2026 at 6:17 AM Oh this is so beautiful and heartwarming! Such s unique take on the contest! Love the imagery of cuddling clouds here, so alluring.. and the quacking duck! As well as the chirping beetle! Feels ever so lively.. best wishes to you in the contest, wonderfully knitted, dear Sotto ~ ✨💫🐚🌙

Alison A Smith August 7, 2026 at 5:01 AM Clever use of get a room.