Go For It

opportunity in the window of the soul- today dawns repentance

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/22/2021 2:10:00 PM

There is always an opportunity to repent. To turn away from wrong and make things right. This is so beautiful and uplifting. :) Brandy

Brian Strand
Date: 9/23/2021 12:55:00 AM

Indeed Brandy,as he robber showed on he Cross

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/21/2021 9:31:00 PM

gorgeous write.

Brian Strand
Date: 9/22/2021 1:22:00 AM

Cheers Caren,have a good day

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2021 11:14:00 AM

Love it!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/22/2021 1:22:00 AM

I like senryu hiku for such sentiments Kim

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/21/2021 8:56:00 AM

Excellent. I love this Brian :)

Brian Strand
Date: 9/22/2021 1:21:00 AM

Yes Heidi short verse is so succict