Notes About The Poem

go fly a kite, no really

- Go Fly a Kite -

Free
                                                  graceful
                                                  heavenly
                                                  In the air, not
                                                  Jailed


                                                  Kids
                                                  loves the
                                                  melody
                                                  Nature's circle
                                                  Old









29/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Light Up The Page 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
(F-G-H-I-J-K-L-M-N-O)
1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Messina Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Anne-lise. Very well done. Hugs Charlie
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 11:56 AM
- Charlie, many thanks for your kind comments and warm congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Many congrats Anne-Lise on your win, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 11:56 AM
- Many thanks Ann, for your kind comments and warm congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 3:32 PM
The beauty of freedom in life and freedom of thought, Anne-Lise! ~ Congratulations on placing first. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 11:55 AM
- Many thanks for your kind comments and warm congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 2:41 PM
Back with congratulations Sunshine. Well done. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 2:49 PM
- Thanks Tom, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Very nice, Sunshine! I especially liked the first one. Congrats on the win
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:33 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations for your great win, with this fun poem. Well done :)
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:22 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 12:34 PM
I love the freedom you depicted Ann...Congrats on a fine win..
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 12:38 PM
- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nau Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Delightful! You made us all the kite. Windy up here in Northern California enough that we should all be out in the Super Bloom with a kite or two. Wishing you luck (but your skill will prevail more than just luck)!
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Many thanks Edlynn, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 8:00 AM
This is sure to win, Anne-lise, it's mind-blowing:)
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 7:39 AM
- Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Anne-Lise, this is so beautifully penned and a winner, if not there is something very wrong in this world, a FAV ~
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and for your valuable fave, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 2:23 PM
Nice one dear friend. Awesome words giving a perfect picture of the joy of flying a kite. Good luck in the contest Sunshine Smile. Poetry hugs, Jenny
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 4:32 AM
- Many thanks Jenny, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Light and easy...a balloon ride...
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 12:07 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 5:45 AM
Such a cute lantern, Anne. Beautifully done. Reads like a winner.
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 12:07 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 7:46 PM
awesome, Ane-lise. I will be doing good if I just can come up with ONE verse for this one.
Andresen Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 12:08 PM
- Many thanks Andrea, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 5:04 PM
awesome write, Sunshine, good for a win. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 5:10 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:53 AM
I immediately began singing "Let's Go Fly a Kite" from Mary Poppin's movie. Thank you for uplifting me today, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:56 PM
- Oh... Mary Poppins let's go fly a kite ... a nice reminder, Caren ... I had forgotten it :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:04 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, beautiful Lanterne from your pen. I love the content. It takes me back to those days when we used to fly our Kites from the hills. Good memories. Your words paint the joy onto your canvas. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:50 PM
- Definitely good memories, Mike :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 7:49 AM
Beautiful lanterns, Anne Lise!
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:48 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 6:36 AM
Lovely... I used to fly a kite as a child.. miss those days..
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:48 PM
- A time with no worries ... you just want a lot of wind S.O. :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 29, 2019 at 9:58 PM
One of our family joys was flying our kites even when they were free falling. I can't tell you how many kites we had to repair. Lol. Yet, everyone enjoyed it. As I did reading your poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:45 PM
-I can imagine :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Bette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Castellenas Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Perfect description of flying a sky. A wonderful poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:36 PM
- ... flying a kite, John :) - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:01 PM
ohh, a really amazing way to do this lanterne, anne... you made it..happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 1:05 PM
- I made it, Nette :))) - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Well done Sunshine ,I'm struggling with this one. Good luck. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:52 PM
- Me too ... Tom :) - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:54 AM
So much joy to fly a kite..a simple pleasure..just like your poem, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 9:18 AM
- I never had a kite ... we use a plastic bag with string in my childhood, Vijay :) - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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