Go

Can it. Can I
Sink it. Then fly.
Please. Seek me.
Set. Me. Free.
Pains and groans
truck through the night.
Names and gnomes.
Shake the light.
Please release me.
I'm tired now.
So tired so. I want
it now, I'm full of woe.
I'm letting you go.
Let me move.
Stuck in the shadow
of the. Stop.
Paint it, carve it
sculpt it. Build it
break it, drop it.
Just my heart
into pieces.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Love Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 11:00 PM
I like it
Ramacher Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Yes I think this is excellent and I love the rhythm.
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