Gnats

A morning walk, a muggy day,
A little warm for not-yet-May;
The country air both fresh and still -
A pleasant outing, right? Until...

The gnats attacked, around my face
And soon they weaseled everyplace -
Into my ears, beneath my hat,
Along my scalp - I squashed some flat...

But every squished one brought ten more,
Which kept arriving by the score.
I waved my hands, I fanned my cap
Yet nothing worked except a slap.

Some pests are worse for these don't bite
Or sting or keep you up at night
But barring that, I'll bet that stats
Would prove that gnats can drive you bats!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:27 PM
Descriptive and witty, Ilene:) This reminds me of when once I accidently brushed against a big wasps nest...a case of acute natural acupuncture!! ~ Regards // paul
Schwartz Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Love it Very fun, made me smile :)
Bauer Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 5:56 PM
thanks, glen! i hope you never have to experience this, though - most annoying!
Gagliardi Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Oh! I love this. What a great meter and rhyme. nice job!
Bauer Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 5:55 PM
thank you, annette! it was almost worth the gnat attack to be able to wrangle a poem out of it...
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