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Gnat Bites

Gnawing gnat breaks through skin
Needle nose - spike now in
Agile, light, felt no pain
Taken blood, their feeding aim

Bites now swell and
Itch like hell
Tiny vampire
Eaten well.
Scratching, itching - skin unwell.

     
            03.09.21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/4/2021 10:09:00 AM
The panic now is Lyme disease in Britain. Must admit, we're getting bitten by all sorts now. Might be insect revenge for all the swatting over the years.
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Emilia James
Date: 9/6/2021 9:31:00 AM
Your probably right there Paul. 'Revenge of the Insects' sounds like a B Movie lol. Emilia : )
Date: 9/4/2021 6:50:00 AM
Enjoyed this humorous write, Emilia. Gnats and mosquitos don't bother me too much but chiggers are a different story and we have a bunch here in Texas! Have a good weekend my friend. Hugs, John
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Emilia James
Date: 9/6/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you John, they seem to be leaving me alone...for now at least. I had quiet a busy weekend, hope you had a good one. Hugs, Emilia : )
Date: 9/3/2021 5:55:00 PM
Hello emilia.now look what you have done.im sure I've just got bitten.lol Take care.:)
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Emilia James
Date: 9/6/2021 9:21:00 AM
You have made me feel guilty now, I'll get you some insect bite cream lol. Emilia : )
Date: 9/3/2021 12:00:00 PM
I know of a ruin in the Southwest that archaeologists will never explore until a gnat remedy clears the area . . . . .
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Emilia James
Date: 9/6/2021 9:19:00 AM
Have friends that live near marshes and they can have it bad there at times. Emilia.
Date: 9/3/2021 6:11:00 AM
Lol, autumn will soon be here and they can all take a hike. Plaster the bites with calomine. Tom
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Date: 9/3/2021 9:23:00 AM
Am thinking of joining them up like dot-to-dots and see what image they bring lol. Roll on Autumn. Emilia : )
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