Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Glowing With a Holorime

*holorime/ holorhyme (a French adjective), means "whole rhyme" and indicates 
homophonous verses; that is, two lines made up of different words that sound the 
same. source: about.com

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*fireflies in lusty glow, darting in neon-colored eyewear
tempting icy nights: oh come for me, your frilled garments i’ll wear!*




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*Brian Strand’s  “ What You Will” Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 10:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi May 14, 2011 at 6:16 PM Ohh so Midsummer's Nights dream!! Congrad's dearie! Light 7 Love

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2011 at 8:42 PM Nette, I enjoyed how you put this together and the notation for us to understand better about holorime. I think you know alot more than i do about literature. I only studied a few classes of it!! Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 11, 2011 at 1:06 PM Congrats sweet Nette on your fabulous win in Brian's contest .. another superb write and win to enjoy.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne May 11, 2011 at 12:45 PM hearty congrats on your cool win with this unique holorime, Mademoiselle Nette!

Elaine George May 11, 2011 at 11:49 AM Fascinating creature they are; I love to watch them flickering in the grass on a summer evening - a real beautiful light show. Many congtats on your BIG WIN, Nette. Lainie

Elaine George May 11, 2011 at 11:29 AM Fascinating creature they are; I love to watch them flickering in the grass on a summer evening - a real beautiful light show. Many congtats on your BIG WIN, Nette. Lainie

Kash Poet May 11, 2011 at 10:36 AM Hi ever glowing Nette.Congrats on your 5th place win.

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 8:10 PM Nette, a wonderful entry.. and good luck wishing you a happy mothers day..p.d.

Sarah Seraphin May 7, 2011 at 7:50 PM * Wow * i need to sit here for a moment * silent just to breathe the beauty in * i loved the kindness of * “Your Beautiful Lights” * explanation at the heading of this * “Fascinating In Colours of Beauties Verse * Gifted & Beautiful Nette” * i love fireflies * lullabies * emerald skies * and reasons why * “Beauty Shines Sooo Bright * A Fave In Rainbow Gold” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Wilma Neels May 7, 2011 at 12:44 PM Nette another awesome image depicted through your words.. Wishing you all the best for Brian's contest ;) *huggs*

Carolyn Devonshire May 7, 2011 at 11:41 AM Great work, Nette. Thanks for introducing us to the "holorime." Brian knows so much about poetry and forms, I know he will enjoy this unique approach. Winning wishes coming to you. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 7, 2011 at 9:41 AM Wonderful imagery casts a spell while absorbing these lovely lines for the contest.. good luck dear Nette my friend.. awesome as always ...and winning too..luv..

Michael J. Falotico May 7, 2011 at 4:11 AM Very good images my dear Nette... true poetry my dear...hugs Michael

Kash Poet May 7, 2011 at 2:31 AM what a beautiful garment to wear on Nette!Excellent write!Best wishes--kashi