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Glowing With a Holorime

*holorime/ holorhyme (a French adjective), means "whole rhyme" and indicates homophonous verses; that is, two lines made up of different words that sound the same. source: about.com --------------------- *fireflies in lusty glow, darting in neon-colored eyewear tempting icy nights: oh come for me, your frilled garments i’ll wear!* all rights reserved © --------------------------------- *Brian Strand’s “ What You Will” Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "What You Will"contest Nette. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/14/2011 6:16:00 PM

Ohh so Midsummer's Nights dream!! Congrad's dearie! Light 7 Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 8:42:00 PM

Nette, I enjoyed how you put this together and the notation for us to understand better about holorime. I think you know alot more than i do about literature. I only studied a few classes of it!! Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 1:06:00 PM

Congrats sweet Nette on your fabulous win in Brian's contest .. another superb write and win to enjoy.. so honored to be sharing this winners list with u my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/11/2011 12:45:00 PM

hearty congrats on your cool win with this unique holorime, Mademoiselle Nette!

Elaine George

Date: 5/11/2011 11:49:00 AM

Fascinating creature they are; I love to watch them flickering in the grass on a summer evening - a real beautiful light show. Many congtats on your BIG WIN, Nette. Lainie

Elaine George

Date: 5/11/2011 11:29:00 AM

Fascinating creature they are; I love to watch them flickering in the grass on a summer evening - a real beautiful light show. Many congtats on your BIG WIN, Nette. Lainie

Kash Poet

Date: 5/11/2011 10:36:00 AM

Hi ever glowing Nette.Congrats on your 5th place win.

Rick Parise

Date: 5/7/2011 9:33:00 PM

I love your originality!!!!!!!Great entry!!!!by the way, I don't always get back to you ON ALL YOUR GRACIOUS COMMENTS~I sure do APPRECIATE each ONE!!!!!!!!Thank you NETTE~Whispering and screaming//////Your a great talent!!!!God bless, ^Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2011 8:10:00 PM

Nette, a wonderful entry.. and good luck wishing you a happy mothers day..p.d.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/7/2011 7:50:00 PM

* Wow * i need to sit here for a moment * silent just to breathe the beauty in * i loved the kindness of * “Your Beautiful Lights” * explanation at the heading of this * “Fascinating In Colours of Beauties Verse * Gifted & Beautiful Nette” * i love fireflies * lullabies * emerald skies * and reasons why * “Beauty Shines Sooo Bright * A Fave In Rainbow Gold” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/7/2011 12:44:00 PM

Nette another awesome image depicted through your words.. Wishing you all the best for Brian's contest ;) *huggs*

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2011 11:41:00 AM

Great work, Nette. Thanks for introducing us to the "holorime." Brian knows so much about poetry and forms, I know he will enjoy this unique approach. Winning wishes coming to you. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/7/2011 9:41:00 AM

Wonderful imagery casts a spell while absorbing these lovely lines for the contest.. good luck dear Nette my friend.. awesome as always ...and winning too..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/7/2011 4:11:00 AM

Very good images my dear Nette... true poetry my dear...hugs Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2011 2:31:00 AM

what a beautiful garment to wear on Nette!Excellent write!Best wishes--kashi