Glowing In Her Rich Heart

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Glowing in her rich heart, hear it go bump, As she dreams of him, in her throat, a soft lump. As stars engage hopscotch, in misty, sparkling skies A cold, barren room, gives birth to her warm, earthy sighs. 10/4/2024

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/7/2024 8:20:00 PM

I like your Couplets, Pangie. They rhymed and flowed perfectly. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/9/2024 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Bill for the encoraging comment. A great example of what a comment should be. In apppreciation,,,Pangie

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/6/2024 12:23:00 AM

I'm captivated with this scene. It has a loneliness, yet a warmth of love.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/6/2024 4:35:00 AM

Wow, Hilda!your comment is inspiring, as I told Kim, . I was so indecisive about posting this. And I had to change the image a few times. So, a big thank you. Pangie.

Elena Eagle

Date: 10/5/2024 1:22:00 PM

A beautiful romantic creative poem. Once again a masterpiece.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2024 1:55:00 PM

Thank you Elena, I hope to do better in future.! Hugs, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/5/2024 10:00:00 AM

What a romantic dream you had Pangie, it's a shame when you have dreams like that you wake up. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2024 12:20:00 PM

Hi Dearest Tom! I think of you every day, but I’m not online everyday. I check and see what mail I have or, comments., want to know .. It would be impossible for me.to forget you. And I don’t know if I should write anymore! Going through a shift in how I want to write..but romantic dreams are as you said.. The thing is… I think romantically most of the time. And yes, I do worry about the future of all our countries.. and I would like to write more about that. Because in truth, we are the future.. and we owe our family a good one. We do not want to leave them bitter, poor or godless. No matter what Tom, God is the ruler of the universe, all of it, including the climate! No human is perfect. Not me, for sure. Thanks for being a friend. TY Pangie

Deb M

Date: 10/4/2024 11:27:00 PM

Absolutely love this Pangie....it flows beautifully and is so engaging! Read it a few times!! Your fellow fish hehe Debx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/5/2024 9:50:00 AM

Hi Friend, Deb! , like you I’ve read the lions over and over again. The short poem if you said, but it has a lot of flow to it. I sent that to.. I don’t like the image and I’m gonna try and change it this morning or take it down, bad book thing that’s the picture is squashes all the photos. I’m trying to put up and it’s murder.. On your page that book thingy is not as close as mine is to the poem. So please forgive me for that error.. I have been hunting for images last night. Pangie. TY