Glow

Otherworldly Glow Gentle waves and pretty skies Stark bright, pearly shore

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Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 2:09:00 PM

So nice, you said so much here- Congrats Molotsi

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:29:00 AM

Oh this is most beautiful Keabetswe. Congratulations on your awesome talent in display, awesome job. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 3:41:00 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

Date: 3/28/2010 1:22:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:47:00 AM

Hey Keabetswe, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, love, audrey

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 11:31:00 AM

Very nice Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:43:00 AM

Keabetswe, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:13:00 AM

Congrats on your HM in the Champagne Skies contest.. a most wonderful write and honor for u to so enjoy as u walk to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...Linda-Marie...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest Keabetswe. Love Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/28/2010 1:08:00 AM

Keabetswe, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Mitch White

Date: 3/26/2010 6:14:00 AM

Nice descriptions- Good luck in this awesome contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2010 5:50:00 AM

Great Haiku that should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara