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For Joseph May's G Or T Personification Poetry Contest

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Glow

With happiness, I love to smile.
Excitement I show with my eyes.
This gives me such a pleasant style,
embracing life like a glittered prize.

Gleam is another name of mine.
In sunlight on water I go.
I love to caress gems divine.
With brightness I visit the snow.

I move with fireflies in night’s sky
In sea I’m friends with jellyfish.
Radiance and sparkle am I.
As fairy dust, I’ll grant a wish!

If I should take a shine to you,
feel flattered, for folks love me so.
I bring such a beautiful view
and good health too, for I am GLOW!
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Narain Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Nicely penned Andrea. Great win.
Volumes Avatar
September 2, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Your poem certainly did GLOW. Uplifting and bright. A very pleasant read Andrea. Congrats
Hawley Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 9:31 PM
Good description of Glow. Congrats on your win in this contest.
May Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Very nicely done Andrea, Congrats on your win
Daniel Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Wow! Personification at its best:)
Ball Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:06 PM
Wonderful The only word that describes this poem. Loved it. God Bless, JB
George Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:55 PM
You have selected a word that will rarely be chosen as a subject for personification and you have dealt with it in a masterly way. All the Best dear Andrea !
Downing  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Oh but I do take a shine to your GLOWING poem :) it flows and glows so beautifully! A fabulous personification, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest :)
Empress Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 5:31 AM
“I move with fireflies in night sky” that line, perfectly depicts glow. Your words are so smooth and they flow just beautifully. Lovely personification. Great choice of word. Very creative
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