Aditi Mishra Poet Acrostic

Glorious Trophies

Gaiety kids bubbling laughter in scarlet delighT
Ladened with trophies of sparkling rusted coppeR
Observing the bounteous man who'd vanished long agO
Rivers of innocence flood the abandoned summer camP
Inside his heart only the old man knows the trutH
Onlooking little kids remind him of his grandson's origamI
Uplifting his blue spirits they leap at bouncing reveriE
Smiling as he hands them his lost boy's glorious trophieS

May 25, 2020
Double Double Words To Bubble Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Winner: Third Place

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Michelle Faulkner June 6, 2020 at 10:58 AM This is a sweet story of memories, congratulations on your placement in the contest! Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 1:46 PM So glad you loved it Michelle. Thank you for your lovely wishes :)

Joseph May June 3, 2020 at 7:54 AM Very nicely penned Aditi, Congrats on your win.. Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 9:40 AM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest Joseph :)

V. Deepa June 3, 2020 at 12:30 AM Very beautiful poem mam:-) Liked the little story behind it:-)Great work. It's heart-melting observing the characters in your poem. Congratulations for your placement.:-) Keep going. Take care.With regards ~Deepa:-) Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 1:10 AM Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation and blessings Deepa. Much love :)

John Watt June 3, 2020 at 12:05 AM I am very happy to see you winning with this touching tale of humanity, Aditi! May you win many more, my friend ~ John Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 1:09 AM Thank you for your kind words and blessings dear friend. Your appreciation always means a lot to me :)

Mohan Chutani June 2, 2020 at 11:49 PM Aditi, so well deserved trophies of the generations being passed down to keep up the valued traditions. Congrats. Mohan Aditi Mishra June 3, 2020 at 1:09 AM Glad you loved it Mohan. Thank you so much for appreciating :)

Line Gauthier May 26, 2020 at 9:40 PM Wow ~ cool acrostic form, Aditi. Bravo~ Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 1:40 AM Thank you so much for appreciating Line :)

Kai Michael Neumann May 26, 2020 at 5:29 AM Very intricate work. I like it. Bets wishes, Kai Aditi Mishra May 26, 2020 at 9:27 AM Glad you liked it Kai. Thank you for appreciating. God bless you :)

John Watt May 25, 2020 at 10:30 PM This is both sad and inspiring, a grandfather losing his beloved grandson is heartbreaking, but he is connecting in a generous fashion with other children bringing them delight and him a balm, is so heartwarming. Beautifully done, Aditi. Please keep inspiring with your poetry. Aditi Mishra May 26, 2020 at 9:26 AM I am glad you found it heartwarming dear friend. You always take time to absorb my words and provide your honest feelings about them. Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation :)

Unknow Error May 25, 2020 at 8:24 PM Creative ingenuity may be hard for some/ Evidently not you, this is exceptionally well done -UE Aditi Mishra May 26, 2020 at 9:25 AM I am grateful for your kind words of appreciation. God bless you :)

Edward Ibeh May 25, 2020 at 1:10 PM This is quite remarkable, Aditi:-) I'm expecting a high placement with this gem! Aditi Mishra May 25, 2020 at 2:49 PM Glad you love it Edward. Thank you so much for your appreciation! :)