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Glorious Trophies

Gaiety kids bubbling laughter in scarlet delighT Ladened with trophies of sparkling rusted coppeR Observing the bounteous man who'd vanished long agO Rivers of innocence flood the abandoned summer camP Inside his heart only the old man knows the trutH Onlooking little kids remind him of his grandson's origamI Uplifting his blue spirits they leap at bouncing reveriE Smiling as he hands them his lost boy's glorious trophieS May 25, 2020 Double Double Words To Bubble Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Winner: Third Place

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/6/2020 10:58:00 AM

This is a sweet story of memories, congratulations on your placement in the contest!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 1:46:00 PM

So glad you loved it Michelle. Thank you for your lovely wishes :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2020 7:54:00 AM

Very nicely penned Aditi, Congrats on your win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 9:40:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest Joseph :)

V. Deepa

Date: 6/3/2020 12:30:00 AM

Very beautiful poem mam:-) Liked the little story behind it:-)Great work. It's heart-melting observing the characters in your poem. Congratulations for your placement.:-) Keep going. Take care.With regards ~Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 1:10:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely words of appreciation and blessings Deepa. Much love :)

John Watt

Date: 6/3/2020 12:05:00 AM

I am very happy to see you winning with this touching tale of humanity, Aditi! May you win many more, my friend ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 1:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and blessings dear friend. Your appreciation always means a lot to me :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/2/2020 11:49:00 PM

Aditi, so well deserved trophies of the generations being passed down to keep up the valued traditions. Congrats. Mohan

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/3/2020 1:09:00 AM

Glad you loved it Mohan. Thank you so much for appreciating :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2020 9:40:00 PM

Wow ~ cool acrostic form, Aditi. Bravo~

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/27/2020 1:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for appreciating Line :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/26/2020 5:29:00 AM

Very intricate work. I like it. Bets wishes, Kai

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:27:00 AM

Glad you liked it Kai. Thank you for appreciating. God bless you :)

John Watt

Date: 5/25/2020 10:30:00 PM

This is both sad and inspiring, a grandfather losing his beloved grandson is heartbreaking, but he is connecting in a generous fashion with other children bringing them delight and him a balm, is so heartwarming. Beautifully done, Aditi. Please keep inspiring with your poetry.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:26:00 AM

I am glad you found it heartwarming dear friend. You always take time to absorb my words and provide your honest feelings about them. Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation :)

Unknow Error

Date: 5/25/2020 8:24:00 PM

Creative ingenuity may be hard for some/ Evidently not you, this is exceptionally well done -UE

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:25:00 AM

I am grateful for your kind words of appreciation. God bless you :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/25/2020 1:10:00 PM

This is quite remarkable, Aditi:-) I'm expecting a high placement with this gem!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/25/2020 2:49:00 PM

Glad you love it Edward. Thank you so much for your appreciation! :)