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Glorious Field For Wedding Dreams - 7

GLORIOUS FIELD FOR WEDDING DREAMS - 7 

Red ~ yellow buds on summer-shine, green leaves sway free on clear blue skies
I, alone on the bench, holding my tears cause she said: "no". . .
Sunrise smile, stop the setting sun, when can I have wedding march?

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12:28 am. February 06, 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 PM Olive, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 4:09:00 AM thanks much Skat.. =)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/11/2015 1:54:00 AM Such a sweet write dear Olive! Congrats on fine win! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:18:00 AM thanks much Dr. UPma. =)~

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/10/2015 3:59:00 PM Very emotional approach to the contest..I could feel the pain..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:16:00 AM thanks much Sar.. =) g;ad you like my poem..

Jan Allison Date: 2/8/2015 2:42:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:14:00 AM thanks much JAn.. =)!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/8/2015 9:16:00 AM Wow, I love this one. I agree with Paul. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/3/2015 3:11:00 AM thanks much Richard.. =)

Paul Callus Date: 2/8/2015 8:01:00 AM Hi Olive_eloi....congrats on making it to the winners' list...although I expected this lovely write to finish higher up. hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 11:13:00 AM thanks Paul.. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/8/2015 1:23:00 AM This was sweet in such a melancholy way. Thanks for entering my contest. Soupmail. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 11:12:00 AM thanks Andie.. :)

James Fraser Date: 2/5/2015 3:45:00 PM Beautiful image with sadness fused, when will that Wedding March be, says she, to? - Fine Sijo Olive, good luck in the contest, James :) :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/7/2015 9:02:00 AM thanks much JAmes.. :) appreciate your drop bys.. :D!

Paul Callus Date: 2/5/2015 12:52:00 PM Very lovely and romantic, Olive_eloi! Wedding march? hmmm let me see my diary:)) hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/6/2015 5:27:00 AM hahahha Jan I am sure she will say alright.. :)! i don't think you don't have a diary PAul.. maybe a ----- you have, :D! Jan Allison Date: 2/6/2015 5:10:00 AM Think Sheila may have something to say about that Paul lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison Date: 2/5/2015 10:40:00 AM absolutely divine imagery Olive - good luck in the contest;-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/6/2015 5:08:00 AM thanks much Jan.. :)! weeeeeee, hugs and hugs.. I hope Andie will like mine.. :O!