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GLORIOUS FIELD FOR WEDDING DREAMS - 7 Red ~ yellow buds on summer-shine, green leaves sway free on clear blue skies I, alone on the bench, holding my tears cause she said: "no". . . Sunrise smile, stop the setting sun, when can I have wedding march? __________________________________________ 12:28 am. February 06, 2015

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 PM
Olive, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 4:09:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. =)
Date: 2/14/2015 8:58:00 AM
Precious write and wonderful win, Olive!
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:08:00 AM
thanks much Dave.. =)!
Date: 2/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
Such a sweet write dear Olive! Congrats on fine win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:18:00 AM
thanks much Dr. UPma. =)~
Date: 2/10/2015 3:59:00 PM
Very emotional approach to the contest..I could feel the pain..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/3/2015 3:16:00 AM
thanks much Sar.. =) g;ad you like my poem..
Date: 2/8/2015 2:42:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/3/2015 3:14:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. =)!
Date: 2/8/2015 9:16:00 AM
Wow, I love this one. I agree with Paul.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:11:00 AM
thanks much Richard.. =)
Date: 2/8/2015 8:01:00 AM
Hi Olive_eloi....congrats on making it to the winners' list...although I expected this lovely write to finish higher up. hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/26/2015 11:13:00 AM
thanks Paul.. :)
Date: 2/8/2015 1:23:00 AM
This was sweet in such a melancholy way. Thanks for entering my contest. Soupmail.
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Date: 2/26/2015 11:12:00 AM
thanks Andie.. :)
Date: 2/5/2015 3:45:00 PM
Beautiful image with sadness fused, when will that Wedding March be, says she, to? - Fine Sijo Olive, good luck in the contest, James :) :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/7/2015 9:02:00 AM
thanks much JAmes.. :) appreciate your drop bys.. :D!
Date: 2/5/2015 12:52:00 PM
Very lovely and romantic, Olive_eloi! Wedding march? hmmm let me see my diary:)) hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/6/2015 5:27:00 AM
hahahha Jan I am sure she will say alright.. :)! i don't think you don't have a diary PAul.. maybe a ----- you have, :D!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/6/2015 5:10:00 AM
Think Sheila may have something to say about that Paul lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/5/2015 10:40:00 AM
absolutely divine imagery Olive - good luck in the contest;-) Hugs Jan xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/6/2015 5:08:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. :)! weeeeeee, hugs and hugs.. I hope Andie will like mine.. :O!